Orwell wrote:good natured jest
Though, I guess nobody else seems to be amused by it. I suppose I'll stick with Hentaileia's: give me a sex.
As far as the actual editing goes, I thought it was fine. The lip sync seems more like filler material which could have been used for more story development, assuming there was a intended one? I personally haven't seen X, yet, but I got the sense that it really relied on the original story to carry through its own. I saw the general theme, but, I felt like it didn't really bring the story together. At about 4~ minutes into the video the song starts again, this should have been your turning point with her death, and then rage, violence, or however the character reacts towards the other male in the second half.
The video quality didn't really bother me, probably because of how dark it is in general, though, after seeing ultima's post it's generally a good idea to clean it up as much as you can.
Overall, I liked it, the song surprised me considering it was limp bizkit.