whats left

jade_eyed_angel · Post by **jade_eyed_angel** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:11 am

shino, i'm so getting that anime because of you

x_rex30 · Post by **x_rex30** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:32 am

i'd like to see how you did. is this video spoilerific?

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:36 am

x_rex30 wrote:i'd like to see how you did. is this video spoilerific?

yes it has spoilers

x_rex30 · Post by **x_rex30** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:41 am

shinodude wrote:
x_rex30 wrote:i'd like to see how you did. is this video spoilerific?
yes it has spoilers

how bad are they though?

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:42 am

x_rex30 wrote:
shinodude wrote:
x_rex30 wrote:i'd like to see how you did. is this video spoilerific?
yes it has spoilers
how bad are they though?

pretty much gives the whole story away

Rurounikeitaro · Post by **Rurounikeitaro** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 9:58 am

shinodude wrote:
x_rex30 wrote:
shinodude wrote:
x_rex30 wrote:i'd like to see how you did. is this video spoilerific?
yes it has spoilers
how bad are they though?
pretty much gives the whole story away

Crap! Why'dya tell him? Guess you had to.

My Suzuka vid gives the whoooole story away. I don't know, it just felt like it had to be that way. Maybe it was the same for you shinodude.

aesling · Post by **aesling** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:43 pm

Ok I lied, it took me two days before I watched and commented on this vid. I blame Addy.

Anyway, I liked it! I think you did a good job with capturing the mood. I think someone may have already said this, but you need a little work with the lip masking. There were parts where it looked like their mouths were vibrating. The ending was also a little sudden. But overall good job.

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:46 pm

Rurounikeitaro wrote:
shinodude wrote:
x_rex30 wrote:
shinodude wrote:
x_rex30 wrote:i'd like to see how you did. is this video spoilerific?
yes it has spoilers
how bad are they though?
pretty much gives the whole story away
Crap! Why'dya tell him? Guess you had to.

My Suzuka vid gives the whoooole story away. I don't know, it just felt like it had to be that way. Maybe it was the same for you shinodude.

ya if you dont its hard to make a good romance with the anime

Tormentor · Post by **Tormentor** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 5:12 am

The video had some slightly errors, but mostly it was okay. To come to the point: If I were you I would have tried building an intro or something simular, since the first scene appears strange at first and one needs a lot of time to get it. During this time the audience can't concentrate on the video, so perhabs a bit slower fade in next time

. As for the visual quality (8 or 9 in an op) it was mostly okay, you had some blur and there was some rain-bow noise, but not enough to make me say Uhhhhh, it's rather like:" would've been better without it

. As for your concept, I personally think you had too many chapters in it. Threr was quite a lot of change in it, which I noticed as bad. You constantly changed from scenes showing the 2 together to scenes showing them having a dispute (I must admmit, I didn't pay attention to the lyrics). I would more likely have seen a story expanding and ending either in a happy, or tragic end, so that you increase it. (Could have started with the 2 hating each other, getting to know each other better and then get together) But that is you decision and I can just tell you what I think

. *Thumbs Up* good video so far, keep it up 7/10.

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Sat Apr 08, 2006 3:25 pm

Tormentor wrote:The video had some slightly errors, but mostly it was okay. To come to the point: If I were you I would have tried building an intro or something simular, since the first scene appears strange at first and one needs a lot of time to get it. During this time the audience can't concentrate on the video, so perhabs a bit slower fade in next time . As for the visual quality (8 or 9 in an op) it was mostly okay, you had some blur and there was some rain-bow noise, but not enough to make me say Uhhhhh, it's rather like:" would've been better without it . As for your concept, I personally think you had too many chapters in it. Threr was quite a lot of change in it, which I noticed as bad. You constantly changed from scenes showing the 2 together to scenes showing them having a dispute (I must admmit, I didn't pay attention to the lyrics). I would more likely have seen a story expanding and ending either in a happy, or tragic end, so that you increase it. (Could have started with the 2 hating each other, getting to know each other better and then get together) But that is you decision and I can just tell you what I think . *Thumbs Up* good video so far, keep it up 7/10.

thanks for the info ill keep it in mind

aesling wrote:Ok I lied, it took me two days before I watched and commented on this vid. I blame Addy.

Anyway, I liked it! I think you did a good job with capturing the mood. I think someone may have already said this, but you need a little work with the lip masking. There were parts where it looked like their mouths were vibrating. The ending was also a little sudden. But overall good job.

yes its all addys fault XD thanks