New Guy07 AMV: Engel Des Toten

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New Guy07 AMV: Engel Des Toten

Post by guy07 » Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:52 pm

It took forever to render, but my "Angel of Death" AMV is up. is it good? good enough that i'm entering it at anime north (i don't think it's gona win anything though). it's to X and the song Engel by Rammstein. Check it out! Sorry the files a bit big but i had to use divx for technical reasons.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=111994
feel free to post what u think in here or leave a op or qc. Enjoy!

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Post by Tormentor » Tue Mar 28, 2006 2:14 pm

Okay, Im dling it right now, I will leave my comment later. Oh and by the way, the correct way would be either "Todesengel" or "Engel des Todes".

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Post by Tormentor » Tue Mar 28, 2006 2:33 pm

Naw, I hate doubleposts, but nevermind.

Okay as for your video. I would advice you to try to sync it not this agressive. I am currently thinkg of the beginning, which was too abrupt if you ask me. Overall you oversynced it to a certain degree. The music is calm, although there are quite rough basses in it. Next time, aim for the flow of the song. Well I guess I needn't give a comment considering the quality. Well as for the effects, you should try to use few ;). Furthermore you used some that decreased the visual quality even more. Your video seems very hectic, try to find a certain calmness in the song and sync the video to it.

The lip-synch was okay so far, although it could have been slightly better. What astonished me about your video was that you somehow managed to get a text-lyric-sync, although it was quite metaphorical.

Well try to improve your issues and keep the work up ;).

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