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killerwog corp
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Post by killerwog corp » Fri Aug 19, 2005 9:50 am

here is my new naruto AMV hope u like it
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=85426

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Shun
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Post by Shun » Fri Aug 19, 2005 8:23 pm

I'd like to start out by saying that this post is not intended to be a jab at you or anything of the sort. I would also like to apologize in advance if you wernt looking for a critique on the video.

First of all, the song choice. It's a decent song and could be used very nicely with naruto, just not in this context. Seeing as how the only word that is in the lyrics is "desire" you should have tryed to play that more on Sasuke. (Perhaps even maybe a compelte sasuke video, or an all around character video of various desires. I.E. Sasuke seeking power, Naruto wanting to be Hokage, and even smaller scenes like back in the forest arc where Sakura wants to prove she can be of help, though i dont think the song is long enough to play on those smaller ones). The fact that you only used the battle between Sasuke vs. Naruto didnt really do the song justice.

Next up is the lip synching. It could have been timed quite a bit better, but thats not the part that really bugged me. Seeing as how it is a women's voice, it just seemed silly to synch it up with 2 males. In almost all instances it almost seemed comical. You probably could have gotten away better just with showing scenes that showed desire, rather then actually having the characters say the word.

I'm not sure where the footage is comming from, but, as far as i know, it could have been worked with to provide a better quality final product.

The synch was really good in some parts and really lacking in others. Some of the breakaways when the song picks back up were done nicely, and yet some parts, especially near the end, seemed to have no synch at all. When Naruto and Sasuke were getting ready to hit each other with the chidori/rasengan it was simply showing scenes over the music and when they finnaly collided there was no moment of impact in the music, which made it feel kind of empty.


I havn't seen any of your other videos so i cant say if this one was better/worse. It was at no meens a bad video, just needs some improvements (atleast in my eyes). I hope that helped(If you were even looking for something like this). Anyways, thats my 2 cents, good luck with your future projects.

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Post by kain2983 » Sat Aug 20, 2005 10:45 am

After watching your video I have the same feelings towards it a shun does so I won't say much. Your timing was good at some points but lacking in others. The ending of the video was dull for the ending of fight because you have these two characters clashing with their most powerful attacks and nothing really happens in the song.

But it was still a pretty good video and you should keep it up.
My newest video: Semper Fi
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