That was a good bit of fun, I enjoyed it
I wouldn't expect somebody using this song for comedy, it just doesn't work. Yet you managed to get some laughs out of me somehow
it was quite noticable though that I was really sitting through some parts as it's hard to do anything funny to those.
I'm usually strictly against this in case of this band, but I think cutting the song out of that reason would've made the video a little better as you could've worked more exclusively with scenes that work (in terms of motion to lend the video a better groove).
Still, I don't think a comedy video to that song in full length could be any better
And I support Move AMVs, there need to be more
Next time use Sugar Sugar Rain, THAT could've worked with Azu
and some Lip-syncing 
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(well edited ones to be exact 
