Hey its my new video with Love hina and such, check it out, its Funny:-D!
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=68037
Troubles with Love
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Kalium
- Sir Bugsalot
- Joined: Fri Oct 03, 2003 11:17 pm
- Location: Plymouth, Michigan
OK, I'll be blunt here. Brace for impact.
- First, this combination has been done, and well - quite some time ago.
- Second, the bumper is too long. A minute, total. That's at least six times the amount of bumper you should have.
- Subs! Worse, old fansubs! Just buy the DVDs, they aren't exactly hard to find. The subs make this vide difficult to watch, at the very least.
- DivX logo, to add to the subs. Insult to injury. This is probably why the video quality is so bad.
- Audio quality could be better. I'm guessing this is a downloaded mp3, from the quality.
- The musical synch is, frankly, haphazard. Sometimes it's there. Mostly it's not.
- Your lyrical synch is also spotty. Many of them had no apparant connection between the audio and video. Example: at 1:19, "Listen to Iron Maiden", and he's getting out the drawing pad. I can't say I see a connection there.
- I see you attempted lip sych at some points. I think. If you did, like at 3:18 or so, it's so innacurate I can't be sure.
OK, I think I'm done tearing holes in it for the moment. Time for the good points.
- You obviously know something about how musical and lyrical synch work. Work on those.
- Your core concept was good, I think. Your execution was lacking, but the concept was good.
I'm not trying to be mean here, although it may seem that way.
- First, this combination has been done, and well - quite some time ago.
- Second, the bumper is too long. A minute, total. That's at least six times the amount of bumper you should have.
- Subs! Worse, old fansubs! Just buy the DVDs, they aren't exactly hard to find. The subs make this vide difficult to watch, at the very least.
- DivX logo, to add to the subs. Insult to injury. This is probably why the video quality is so bad.
- Audio quality could be better. I'm guessing this is a downloaded mp3, from the quality.
- The musical synch is, frankly, haphazard. Sometimes it's there. Mostly it's not.
- Your lyrical synch is also spotty. Many of them had no apparant connection between the audio and video. Example: at 1:19, "Listen to Iron Maiden", and he's getting out the drawing pad. I can't say I see a connection there.
- I see you attempted lip sych at some points. I think. If you did, like at 3:18 or so, it's so innacurate I can't be sure.
OK, I think I'm done tearing holes in it for the moment. Time for the good points.
- You obviously know something about how musical and lyrical synch work. Work on those.
- Your core concept was good, I think. Your execution was lacking, but the concept was good.
I'm not trying to be mean here, although it may seem that way.