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Post by AltruisticCrono » Mon Jan 03, 2005 5:12 pm

Where to begin?

I seriously spent much of my life making an AMV (we all have, eh?). If any of you would be so kind, I'd appreciate some opinions. Majority of my videos in the past didn't get many reviews, but I believe this AMV has a chance. I'll exchange reviews by rating one of your own videos. Thanx!

-AltruisticCrono

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http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=57335

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Ehh?

Post by AltruisticCrono » Thu Jan 06, 2005 9:42 am

Yikes! No one has replied yet? :shock:

Sighs.......

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Post by Gemberkoekje » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:36 am

awww that's sad... i might not be what you'd hoped but i'll do my best... might learn a thing or 2 myself!
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Post by Gemberkoekje » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:37 am

gimmeee... 10 mins or so :P
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Post by Shaira » Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:16 pm

Watched it and Opinion given ! Great work )

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Post by Gemberkoekje » Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:33 pm

Here i go :P

First and foremost i want to ask you to take any critisism and do something with it. Do not critisise me for critisising you, but look at your vid and ask yourself if i'm right.

Second - i am not a AMV maker yet, though i'm working on one. So that review i'm still getting of you :P

Now for the review (i should really make some less noise here)

The beginning was really overwhelming and busy. It took me about 20 seconds to realise this was actually just the beginning. And then it took off - Fast, deadly, and well timed. This is something i really enjoyed during your video, you seem to have a well timed sense of timing :P

I think a AMV should be more than a well timed collection of random pictures, and this is where my personal first backdraw is. There doesn't seem to be any kind of story or line involved, i think this is a shame. After a while i really wondered why i was watching all this violence. But then the little more 'relaxed' part came. I think you did this really well.

You make use of a lot of effects. Although effects can be fun, i think they overwhelm a bit in your video, leaving the pure, untouched anime under a crust. Since i think Anime is one of the nicest things on earth, i also think you shouldn't put too much make up on.

Final Judgement:
Pro's:
Well timed.
Really enjoyable at times.
Looks quite professional.

Ad's:
A little too busy for my tastes. (Talking about the video now)
No visual (story)line
Maybe too much effects used.

Giving it a 7.5 on - well - my scale :P
BakaNeko.nl!

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Post by Gemberkoekje » Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:54 pm

It's on your 'report card' so to speak
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Post by keeso » Thu Jan 06, 2005 1:12 pm

Hmm, ill op your amv , and for exchange you op my newest.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=58534

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Post by Gemberkoekje » Thu Jan 06, 2005 1:16 pm

Oh when i scrolled over your file one more thing... Add a frame of black or a pic ;) it's really nasty now ^^' - but im just whining.
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Post by chambeyc » Thu Jan 06, 2005 1:42 pm

I just give you my op. This is a really nice one, man!

I think mine is worth seeing too.
Here it is:
http://nago.animemusicvideos.org/locald ... hp?v=56434

Please enjoy and give an op :)
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