New Full Metal Panic AMV

bob790 · Post by **bob790** » Wed Jul 28, 2004 4:33 am

My first serious AMV. (8th total)

I'd be grateful for constructive comments. (feel free to do an op if you prefer

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Thank you.

SnhKnives · Post by **SnhKnives** » Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:36 am

hmmm it wasnt bad but it was hard to tell a definant story to be told.

The cuts and action sync could have been a little better.

not a bad video, just some things you need to work on.

bob790 · Post by **bob790** » Wed Jul 28, 2004 8:56 am

SnhKnives wrote:hmmm it wasnt bad but it was hard to tell a definant story to be told.

The cuts and action sync could have been a little better.

not a bad video, just some things you need to work on.

It didn't really have a single story so much as summaries of the various stories from the series.

Can you give me an example of where the action sync was off, so I can see what I'm doing wrong and how to improve it.