boogiepop sunshine

Feedback on cataloged Anime Music Videos

Moderators: Mol, seasons

Forum rules
Please observe the following unique rules for this forum:
  • Please limit your new threads (not replies) to one per week. If you have several new videos to announce, create one thread for all the videos. (Note: if you forget one you can edit your post!)
  • Offsite links are allowed, but you are required to have a catalog entry for that video as well. Threads announcing videos that do not contain a catalog entry will be moved to the Awaiting Catalog Entry sub-forum and will be deleted in 2 weeks if an entry is not created.
  • When posting announcements, it is recommended that you include links to the catalog entries (using the video ID) in your post.
  • Videos that do not contain anime are allowed to be announced in the Other Videos section and are not required to have catalog entries.
Locked
User avatar
odian0
Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2003 10:10 am
Location: MA, USA
Contact:
Org Profile

boogiepop sunshine

Post by odian0 » Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:26 pm

okay, so, this is my second amv. it seemed like a good idea when i started to make it. the song is "walking on sunshine" by Me First and the Gimmie Gimmies. the anime is boogiepop phantom. i noticed that there weren't many boogiepop phantom amv's listed under the catagory of "fun." thus, "boogiepop sunshine."

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=44455

well, check it out, and if you have time, please leave an opinion on it. ^_^ ja ne.

User avatar
Scintilla
(for EXTREME)
Joined: Mon Mar 31, 2003 8:47 pm
Status: Quo
Location: New Jersey
Contact:
Org Profile

Post by Scintilla » Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:37 pm

:shock:

Boogiepop Phantom and <i>fun?</i>

I have to see this now.
ImageImage
:pizza: :pizza: Image :pizza: :pizza:

User avatar
odian0
Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2003 10:10 am
Location: MA, USA
Contact:
Org Profile

Post by odian0 » Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:05 pm

yay! leave me a comment if you can telling me if you liked it at all.

User avatar
Scintilla
(for EXTREME)
Joined: Mon Mar 31, 2003 8:47 pm
Status: Quo
Location: New Jersey
Contact:
Org Profile

Post by Scintilla » Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:09 pm

Compress your audio to something other than PCM, it'll leave a LOT more room for the video in the final filesize, and you'll be able to afford higher quality. As it is, you might have wanted to consider resizing to a lower resolution to save on video quality (after deinterlacing or IVTC).

Popframe at the cut at 1:03.

You might want to consider unchecking the box that says "Deinterlace when speed is below 100%" on clips that have jagged lines, assuming you're using Premiere 6.5 or lower.

Also, it might save you some headaches to read[<a href="/guides/avtechbeta/">BAG</a>] up on inverse telecining and editing in 23.976 progressive, as it'll save you all or most of the troubles associated with interlacing.

Lip sync is kinda flappy -- reminds me of my first attempt ("NERV Evening News"). Remember that, usually, when people talk, their mouths don't close completely after every single word.

With the way you chose to end it, I'd have considered letting the audio fade out more gradually, so that it wouldn't end until the words "Life Can Be So Nice" had faded out.

I guess this would fall under "dark comedy" more than anything... surprisingly, you managed to get some good lyric synch in (the scenes from "My Fair Lady" were pretty darn well placed), and a lot of the rest of it was heavy with irony that somehow worked. At least to me. I can see where this video might not be everyone's cup of tea though.

Your editing style plays a large part in making this video work -- it fits the music better than the footage does, that's for sure. :)

Nothing spectacular, but it's enjoyable. Just fix the quality issues and work on your lip sync.
ImageImage
:pizza: :pizza: Image :pizza: :pizza:

User avatar
SnhKnives
V.I.E. 5.5
Joined: Wed Mar 26, 2003 12:57 am
Location: Atlanta
Contact:
Org Profile

Post by SnhKnives » Mon Jul 26, 2004 11:52 pm

yeah, it wasnt bad, but had some technical problems...


pretty good pixelation, and some of the lip syncs seemed weird.


not too bad tho
Image

User avatar
OtakuForLife
Joined: Wed Sep 25, 2002 3:37 pm
Status: In relationship
Location: Endsvill (North Providence, RI , USA)
Org Profile

Post by OtakuForLife » Tue Jul 27, 2004 11:27 am

I like it! , anyway you got some lip flap issues ,but, other
then that it was so cheerful and fun it's at-least a 4 :)
Also, I happen to like tastless or dark humor videos.

User avatar
Undertow
Joined: Wed Jan 28, 2004 10:23 am
Location: Holland
Org Profile

Post by Undertow » Tue Jul 27, 2004 6:55 pm

Well, i left you an Op because i really liked your other vid, but i think 99 Orchestrations is still your best one. My comments are in the Op

User avatar
odian0
Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2003 10:10 am
Location: MA, USA
Contact:
Org Profile

Post by odian0 » Tue Jul 27, 2004 9:31 pm

thanks to everyone who has checked it out thus far.

my apologies on a few things:

1 - the lip synch. i began trying it, then i gave up, then i just let the lips flap. sorry. :(

2 - any "technical" problems. see, i never read an instruction file on how to do this, kiarrens just showed me a few steps and away i went. so any technical problems, please be specific so that i can look into those things in the future.

okay, and note, this video was made just for fun. i know it kinda sucks, but it was made with the intent on amusing me.

thank you.

User avatar
Coffee 54
Joined: Tue May 11, 2004 8:26 am
Contact:
Org Profile

Post by Coffee 54 » Tue Jul 27, 2004 9:59 pm

Very disturbing. A little too much though for my tastes. But, dead on for other peoples, I think my older brother might like this one.

User avatar
OtakuForLife
Joined: Wed Sep 25, 2002 3:37 pm
Status: In relationship
Location: Endsvill (North Providence, RI , USA)
Org Profile

Post by OtakuForLife » Fri Jul 30, 2004 12:48 am

Not is disturbing as MJ's Night-shift nurses video :)
Think I almost lost my lunch with that one...

Locked

Return to “AMV Announcements & Feedback”