Hey not bad
Good song choice ,and I liked it some of your act/lyrics sync , you have a good sense of timing , but have some drums beats/guitar chords that would be better if you synchronize those parts with scenes cutsor effects.
But that's the editing style that *I* enjoy more , you don't have to pay attention for what I said about your act/sync if you don't like vids synchronized to every beat of the song. O_o
The capture quality it's good , but have some parts that are a bit blocky (example 1:04 ~ 1:06) , i can't imagine what you have done wrong , but maybe if you decrease the resolution a bit you can make a better encoding.
One more thing , I noticed too , some scanlines during your vid , I can't be sure if this is a problem with interlacing or if you haven't setted your vid to be exported with "no fileds"
Other than that , I liked it.
The song and anime choice worked well. ^^
Nothing usefull here .