Arigatomyna wrote:Uncle Milo, dwchang, and Otohiko bring up something that I find is odd with anime. How to critique the story.
If the anime were a novel, there would be nothing wrong with saying the writer failed to bring across what he intended because readers didn't catch the message. It isn't up to the reader to get the message - the reader just looks at what's there, it's the writer who molds his story into a format that a reader can understand. If only a few readers understand the story then yes, it failed to reach the majority. That is a flaw on the part of the writer, not the majority - the only case where this isn't true is if the writer *wanted* to have a story that only a few could understand.
If an anime is aimed at being undestandable for any viewer, then it shouldn't bring up complaints from a majority of viewers about how unclear certain aspects are. If the anime was done so that only a few very astute viewers would catch it, then it doesn't matter if the rest of the viewers are left frowning and wondering what the hell just happened and what the point was. It's a matter of what the creator (in the case of anime) had in mind when he made the story. You *can* say he failed if he didn't accomplish his original intention. That's how you critique 'stories' whether it's writing or animation - "Did the creator accomplish what he set out to do?"
What right does the viewer have? The same right any reader or viewer has - to find out what the creator intended and to tell whether or not that creator acheived that goal. This is based on the reader/viewer's own reaction. If the creator failed on one viewer, that leaves a possibility that the creator failed as a whole - add up the number of people he failed to achieve his goal with and you can find out if he really did fail.
My main point is that you can criticise the creator (writer) of an anime just like you'd criticise the writer of an essay or documentary. Did he achieve his goal? If not, then he failed. Maybe he only failed on one or two people, but if he failed to reach a multitude, then you can't say he's very good at what he does.
Just because anime isn't disected like novels in an educational setting, that doesn't meant the creator of that anime has any protection or rights over his viewers. He's subject to be judged the same as anyone else telling a story - storytelling is not a painting that can be called 'great' even when no one understands it. The message is as important as the delivery, and if the creator can't put his message into a format people can read, then he's a bad writer (creator).
So you're saying if a majority of idiots don't get something that is complicated, then it's the writer's fault for not writing only stuff that the masses can get? Are you saying that no writer should ever be allowed to write about complicated material because there's just going to be too many people who don't get it and therefore, the army of people who didn't get it get to decide that it is bad and therefore the writer is at fault.
In that case, writers will always fail.
And... anime can be disected like any other movie or TV series.
And what's this about paintings? A painting is just as capable of being disected as a book... true... it's a different medium and a different approach for criticism... but I find it odd that you view a movie or TV series where the majority don't get it is bad and the writer is at fault, but a painting can be great even if no one gets it.
I wish I had more time to write... but let me make a point.
In an actual anime, we are out in space. A team finds a ruined starship and they try to enter it. They look all about to find an entry point and they finally find one. Just as they are about to enter this entry point, the soundtrack plays the final crescendo of the last Aria in Madame Butterfly.
With what I have just told you, you should now know that the people entering the ship are in real trouble. Most likely they are all going to die or most of them are going to die.
I thought this was brilliant.
However, according to your argument, there will be MANY, MANY people who won't understand why I reached the conclusion that I did.
Why? Because a lot of anime fans don't happen to be into opera. I'm not a huge opera fan myself, but I know Madame Butterfly... the last aria is a famous piece of music. Madame Butterfly kills herself on this last crescendo... and since they are entering the ship on that note, we know something bad is going to happen.
I saw it and knew. (Later on in the anime, everyone is dead or as good as dead)
Of course, by your argument, the writer should not be called brilliant for his clever use of direction and music to create beautiful foreshadowing... he should be condemned because his writing was confusing to all the anime fans who have no knowledge of music, opera, directing or foreshadowing.
Your formula might be good for determining financial success... but as far as I'm concerned... if enough people get the message, then chances are, the writer found his audience and connected with them.
I have to stop here, but I seriously disagree with your views.
-Uncle Milo