Violet Evergarden「AMV」Lonely

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Violet Evergarden「AMV」Lonely

Post by Samishii28 » Mon Mar 30, 2020 11:52 am



Video: Violet Evergarden「AMV」Lonely
Category: Drama, Romance, Sentimental
Anime: Violet Evergarden
Song: Lonely
Artist: Nathan Wagner
Creator: Indominus587


This is my third AMV, any advice is helpful, thanks in advance :)

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Re: Violet Evergarden「AMV」Lonely

Post by seasons » Wed Apr 08, 2020 3:03 pm

Nice atmosphere. Nice pacing.

I've had a hard time getting into AMVs made with this anime and I don't know if this effort was really able to overcome that. But this was a pretty and well-edited video.

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Re: Violet Evergarden「AMV」Lonely

Post by vkamv » Fri Apr 10, 2020 8:47 pm

Interesting AMV. Having watched this anime I felt I understood the messages you were trying to convey with the lyrical sync. To a new comber it might be hard to grasp and seam random. From a technically standpoint, you had a lot of static scenes here. I feel if you added a soft zoom or zoom out to the scenes it will make it more dynamic and give it a sense of motion. Not a strong zoom. But something like a scale of 100 to 105. That's just my tip. Pretty engrossing mood overall. Nice work.

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