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Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by KonoSuhWhat » Thu Sep 05, 2019 6:33 am

Video: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - AMV
Category: Action, Serious, Epic
Anime: My Hero Academia, Demon Slayer, Attack On Titan
Song: attack ON titan
Artist: Attack On Titan
Creator: kydon



Hey Guys,
I need feedback on this style of editing. I went for a more movie scene vibe with this one, basically combining 4 different scenes from 3 different animes. Please provide your honest thoughts and opinions.
THANKS!

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Re: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by Kireblue » Thu Sep 05, 2019 8:21 am

Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible :D . If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... 2#p1546652

Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.

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Re: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by KonoSuhWhat » Thu Sep 05, 2019 10:24 am

Kireblue wrote:
Thu Sep 05, 2019 8:21 am
Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible :D . If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... 2#p1546652

Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.
Just catalogged. Thanks Kire.

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Re: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by seasons » Thu Sep 05, 2019 12:05 pm

In my opinion, the multiple sources you're working with do match pretty well in intensity and tone, but they never quite melded into something that felt bigger or less heterogeneous than, well, the title of this AMV.

I found the second half of this video much more enjoyable than the first half. It turns a corner at 2:20 where the music takes on a more hopeful and powerful tone, and you matched this really well with scenes that you'd been wisely keeping up your sleeve for such a moment.

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Re: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by KonoSuhWhat » Thu Sep 05, 2019 1:31 pm

seasons wrote:
Thu Sep 05, 2019 12:05 pm
In my opinion, the multiple sources you're working with do match pretty well in intensity and tone, but they never quite melded into something that felt bigger or less heterogeneous than, well, the title of this AMV.

I found the second half of this video much more enjoyable than the first half. It turns a corner at 2:20 where the music takes on a more hopeful and powerful tone, and you matched this really well with scenes that you'd been wisely keeping up your sleeve for such a moment.
Thank you for your reply. Do you suggest reuploading with first half cut out? I also found that the first half was quiet boring, but i feel like it leads up to 2:20.

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Re: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by seasons » Thu Sep 05, 2019 4:05 pm

I don't think I'd advise cutting out the entire first half of the video, you do establish a sense of stakes in the first half of the AMV that makes the second half hit a little harder than it otherwise would just on its own.

I would say that editing with subtitle-free footage will work in your favor, so get your hands on that if you can (or just use clips where no characters are speaking, which could place some unhelpful limitations on what you're able to work with).

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Re: Demon Slayer x AOT x Boku No Hero - MASHUP AMV [Feedback Needed]

Post by Mol » Wed Sep 18, 2019 6:29 am

Well idea seems to be hre , i guess going around few sources isn't too bad, i thinkj tho pacing and sync could have been better other than that i guess avoid subs and ur fine.
Still better than that MMO.
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