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Charlotte - Extension Cord [AMV]

Post by Cneq » Sat Jun 10, 2017 8:48 pm

Hello, I made a new AMV a few days ago and just decided to Upload it here today since It's been a week since my last Post. Any feedback/advice would be appreciated so I can improve in the future, Thanks!



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Re: Charlotte - Extension Cord [AMV]

Post by animefan1 » Mon Jun 12, 2017 9:46 pm

First let me just say that I REALLY liked Charlotte! It was one of those anime that I feel didn't get enough attention, so thank you for making this AMV just for that reason alone! But anyways...

Onto my feedback. I really liked the timing of the scenes, so kudos to your editing skills! However, towards the 2nd half of the AMV, the scene selection was not as good/too repetitive. I can give more examples upon request, but those are my two cents.

So you said that you uploaded your AMV on HERE, right? Where is it?
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Re: Charlotte - Extension Cord [AMV]

Post by Cneq » Mon Jun 19, 2017 6:34 am

animefan1 wrote:First let me just say that I REALLY liked Charlotte! It was one of those anime that I feel didn't get enough attention, so thank you for making this AMV just for that reason alone! But anyways...

Onto my feedback. I really liked the timing of the scenes, so kudos to your editing skills! However, towards the 2nd half of the AMV, the scene selection was not as good/too repetitive. I can give more examples upon request, but those are my two cents.

So you said that you uploaded your AMV on HERE, right? Where is it?
Hey, Sorry for the late reply but just wanted to say Thanks for your feedback/advice. I also really loved Charlotte but I agree it seemed a lot of other people didn't share that same opinion.

Thanks, I appreciate and I agree I wasn't too happy with the 2nd half as I was with the first part I did. I can understand if someone watching it would find it a bit repetitive. And yeah I did, Still not too sure how the whole database thing works on this website so I have no idea if it's public or private. Anyways Thanks again for the feedback!

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Re: Charlotte - Extension Cord [AMV]

Post by animefan1 » Tue Jun 20, 2017 1:57 am

You're welcome on all fronts. And in order to have your AMV uploaded on the a-m-v.org server, you need to do it via a FTP (File Transfer Protocall) program. I know how to use it but i'm sure some other people can elaborate on it as well. Speaking of which...

I need to check if one of MY AMV's finished uploading. It's a "fixed version" of a AMV I already have up here, but I tried it before an hour ago and it said that it didn't go through. I did it again so let's see if it went through THIS time! *crosses fingers*
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Re: Charlotte - Extension Cord [AMV]

Post by The_McLaughlin » Tue Jun 20, 2017 8:02 am

Looks to me you made an entry in the data base and then have an external link (I'm assuming a youtube link I didn't click it) to your amv. If you'd like to have a local copy on the org you'll have to upload it through FTP, though I heard there was a web upload now I just never bothered to use it so I don't know where that one stands. As for FTP programs a free one that I use and a lot of other people use is FileZilla. Radical_Yue has a good tutorial for how to upload VIA FTP to the org on her youtube and also links you to the program FileZilla so I'll share that link for you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8fqnI-X ... 9A38F34635

As for the amv I thought the mood fit the song pretty well so the sources matched pretty well. I did think a few things could have been timed a bit better, but overall it was timed pretty well and was relatively enjoyable to watch.

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