This Video is my first real project so I hope you gonna enjoy this.
Have fun
I hope I did nothing wrong with that opened topic here and considered all the criterions.
[fixed youtube embed and added vidid - Kireblue]
CLANNAD AMV
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- Please limit your new threads (not replies) to one per week. If you have several new videos to announce, create one thread for all the videos. (Note: if you forget one you can edit your post!)
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CLANNAD AMV
First of all Im totally new here. Im happy that Ive found a nice AMV Forum like this here and to share my videos with you.
This Video is my first real project so I hope you gonna enjoy this.
Have fun
I hope I did nothing wrong with that opened topic here and considered all the criterions.
[fixed youtube embed and added vidid - Kireblue]
This Video is my first real project so I hope you gonna enjoy this.
Have fun
I hope I did nothing wrong with that opened topic here and considered all the criterions.
[fixed youtube embed and added vidid - Kireblue]
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Kireblue
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Re: CLANNAD AMV
Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible 
. If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... 2#p1546652
Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.
. If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... 2#p1546652Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.
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Kireblue
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Re: CLANNAD AMV
I see that you added the catalog entry, so I'm moving your post back now 
In terms of your video, its had a nice flow to it, and you did a good job on cutting on the right notes. Some of the scenes did drag on too long though (like the ones in the classroom at 2:20). And the occasional lip flap hurt it a bit as well. My last complaint would be that the scenes also seemed to jump around a bit, and that they weren't always related to the things before and after them. So this caused me to loose interest over time. But overall, you did a pretty great job considering this was your first video. You definitely captured the right mood and pace 
In terms of your video, its had a nice flow to it, and you did a good job on cutting on the right notes. Some of the scenes did drag on too long though (like the ones in the classroom at 2:20). And the occasional lip flap hurt it a bit as well. My last complaint would be that the scenes also seemed to jump around a bit, and that they weren't always related to the things before and after them. So this caused me to loose interest over time. But overall, you did a pretty great job considering this was your first video. You definitely captured the right mood and pace