[ Nisekoi] Chitoge x Raku

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[ Nisekoi] Chitoge x Raku

Post by hellfire2902 » Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:02 am


AMV story of Chitoge and Raku.
This is my AMV.
Sorry if i don't good English.

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Re: [ Nisekoi] Chitoge x Raku

Post by PrincessMareep » Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:42 am

From my understanding of their relationship, this may not of been the best song choice.
The transitions and transitional effects used could of been a bit smoother and cleaner too in my opinion. I'd also try to avoid using clips with a lot of lip flapping.
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Re: [ Nisekoi] Chitoge x Raku

Post by hellfire2902 » Mon Apr 11, 2016 9:08 am

Thank you for your opinion.
sorry I don't good English.
Yes, their relationship is funny, but I want to change it :). I'm a newbie and this is my third AMV so it's don't good :(. I am trying learning more than.
And may I ask a question ? I use IMovie on MAC, I just see some transitions. Can you introduce to me application to make AMV ?

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Re: [ Nisekoi] Chitoge x Raku

Post by Kireblue » Mon Apr 11, 2016 9:27 am

I think that the source combo was cute and could have worked really well if your scenes were just shorter and synced more with the flow of the song. Here is a video tutorial that Vivifx made about flow. I think that it could really help you in determining when and where to end your clips so that they don't drag behind the pace of the song https://youtu.be/J5Jjxb6Lw7s Its in English, but hopefully you can still understand it.

I also think more natural transitions (likes simple crossfades and hard cuts) would have helped the flow instead of the effect transition that you had at 0:31 and 1:50. Romance videos often don't need a lot of fancy effects to be good. But not bad for your third video. Keep trying and being open to criticism and advice :up:

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Re: [ Nisekoi] Chitoge x Raku

Post by hellfire2902 » Mon Apr 11, 2016 11:21 pm

thank you.
ok, I will absorb your opinion :)

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