Puella Pain (The Pleasure and Pain of Being a Magical Girl)

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Puella Pain (The Pleasure and Pain of Being a Magical Girl)

Post by ZaCloud » Mon Aug 03, 2015 1:56 pm



I thought of this video idea on a trip to Poland, and when I got back I got to work almost immediately, even while combatting jet-lag. It took me either 2 or 3 days, depending on how much time bent around my waking/sleeping hours. :D

It only marginally follows the lyrics, but thematically you could say it is the upsides and downsides of accepting Kyuubei's contract (mostly downsides, though).

Enjoy. Please let me know what you think. :)
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Re: Puella Pain (The Pleasure and Pain of Being a Magical Gi

Post by MycathatesyouAMV » Sun Aug 09, 2015 3:49 pm

You have some decent internal sync on some of the beats, but I think your video could benefit from increasing the pacing at certain points of the song. It felt a little too slow at those points.
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Re: Puella Pain (The Pleasure and Pain of Being a Magical Gi

Post by ZaCloud » Mon Aug 10, 2015 9:39 pm

Well, I had to use slow scenes when the music got softer, or it wouldn't have matched.
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