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by Lapskaus » Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:39 am
First of all: don't watermark your videos! ;_;
It's distracting and if people actually "steal" your videos, then you know that you've done everything right. I'm usually proud when people steal my videos! I don't make money from showing my videos around, so I'm glad if more people can see and like them (as if).
Now to your video.
It's good, lol ;D
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You kinda overdid it with the white flashes at some point though.
0:35 - I'm not sure if you actually tried to lip-sync there or not. Half of it fits, half of it doesn't.
Your video also suffers from lip-flap a lot. If the lyrics don't really imply talking (0:47 is fine for example) then the characters shouldn't be talking either.
The beat sync isn't always very accurate. It's totally fine from 2:54 - 3:20 but what's that from 1:41 - 1:53? A little slower pacing might've been better at some points.
All that said, your video is still good :>
It has a very nice atmosphere and you did no really bad mistakes or anything. Just keep going and you'll automatically get better, you got a talent for this.
Also: 2:44 - ghost frame, lel
I will be glad with some feedback 
