My new Romance AMV please watch

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My new Romance AMV please watch

Post by TakutoYamamoto » Sun Jul 12, 2015 7:32 pm

https://www.mediafire.com/?k7oovi16lavcb23


<b>Video:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/video/198816">Feel The Light &#9835; AMV </a>
<b>Category:</b> Other, Romance, Sentimental
<b>Anime:</b> Nerawareta Gakuen
<b>Song:</b> Feel The Light (From The "Home" Soundtrack)
<b>Artist:</b> Jennifer Lopez
<b>Creator:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/usernum ... amamoto</a>



This is a better cleaner versionAnime: Nerawareta_Gakuen
Song: Feel the Light from the movie Home
amv created by: Matt Armstrong, aka (me), TakutoYamamoto, popokarimundesu, MashuuMV's, all me
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Re: My new Romance AMV please watch

Post by Kireblue » Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:28 am

You should avoid putting special characters in your video title. They never get displayed properly when you announce your vid and just causes a whole bunch of random numbers to appear.

In terms of your actual video, I feel that you kept switching between the animation styles and lighting too often. There were times where it felt right to have a flashback, and so the change in animation worked. But a lot of times, you flashed back and forth unnecessarily and caused the change in animation to be really jarring (especially when you went from a night scene to the really brightly colored scenes of their childhood). I also had problems following the story. I have no knowledge of the show, and so I don't really get the scenes with the crystal or why she jumped/ fell off the bridge.

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