a few suggestions that I'll give you is to avoid using footage with credits in them. Also, try to bob your head to the song or picture yourself dancing while you edit. A lot of your scenes are too long and don't really match the intensity of your song. And so bobbing your head will give you a better idea of when you need to have a scene change or a new movement/ action in your video. Everyone has this problem starting out though. Lets not even talk about my first vid

. So good luck with all your future vids, and keep improving
