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DarcySenpai
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NEW 「AMV」• Revolution ♫♪ Action AMV

Post by DarcySenpai » Mon May 25, 2015 6:03 am

would be awesome if you guys could watch my amv and give some feedback on what you guys think and if you like it subscribing would be awesome XD >>> LINK https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81LuIDukegc



[Edit - Added VIDID link with information. Here's a guide on how to do that in the future, if you'd like: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... 3#p1447513 -Ileia]

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Re: NEW 「AMV」• Revolution ♫♪ Action AMV

Post by Kireblue » Mon May 25, 2015 7:27 pm

You video has some god sync at parts, but its main flaw is that a lot of the scenes don't really flow into the next one. You kinda just cycled through random fights without really trying to match their movements. If you try to place scenes with similar moments next to each other, they will feel less like a break and flow better. For example: Having a character from anime A kicking and then having a character from anime B dogging (in order to make it feel like the 2 events are connected even though they are from different anime). Another flaw in you video is that the pace and energy of your clips isn't really going up and down with the pace and energy of the song. Although your song is consistently very fast, it does have moments where it gets faster and moments where it gets slower (even if only for a few moments). You have to match these tempo changes with your anime footage so that the video becomes more interesting and feels more connected to the song. I refer to this as the song's "down time", and its important to take advantage of those moments in order for the action parts to feel even more intense.

Lastly, you should try not to use footage that has subtitles and watermarks (or at least zoom in on your footage to remove them). These things along with the logo that you put at the bottom of the screen are distractions. If you really want add your name to your videos, you can make a intro or put credits at the very end.

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Re: NEW 「AMV」• Revolution ♫♪ Action AMV

Post by DarcySenpai » Mon May 25, 2015 7:44 pm

Thanks very much for your review all are great points thankyou very much ill make sure to focus more on those points in the future :D

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「AMV」100 Subs Special • ♫♪ Action

Post by DarcySenpai » Tue May 26, 2015 5:11 am

Video:
Category: Action
Anime: Fate/Zero (TV), Naruto, Bleach (+35)
Song: linkin park vs celldweller (sideburns remix)
Artist: linkin park vs celldweller (sideburns remix)
Creator: DarcySenpai

[As per the forum rules, you may only make one new thread per week so I merged this with your other current thread. -Ileia]

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Re: 「AMV」100 Subs Special • ♫♪ Action

Post by Kireblue » Tue May 26, 2015 4:53 pm

DarcySenpai wrote:Video:
Category: Action
Anime: Fate/Zero (TV), Naruto, Bleach (+35)
Song: linkin park vs celldweller (sideburns remix)
Artist: linkin park vs celldweller (sideburns remix)
Creator: DarcySenpai

[As per the forum rules, you may only make one new thread per week so I merged this with your other current thread. -Ileia]
I definitely see a more sync and flow in this one than your last one. So keep it up :up: The org isn't really meant for this type of video though. This video is fine for your youtube subscribbers, but the org (and specifically the announcement thread) is meant for full length videos. This was really just a promo for your channel. Oh and, you shouldn't really put special characters in your video title. Both of your videos have all those random symbols in the titles because of all the special characters that you are using.

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