So this video was originally made for a contest, but it got rejected for too much violence.
Still proud of my creation, this amv was more or less an experiment.
Buried Alive
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Re: Buried Alive
you should try to change up your type of scenes more. Just jumping from fight to fight without any breaks isn't very interesting. You need things like buildups and down time in order to make your action scenes feel even more intense. For example: Your vid immediately started off right in the middle of a fight, but the first 15 seconds would have been better used as buildup in order to establish a good mood and have the later fights hit harder.
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dazza1008
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Re: Buried Alive
I can see why it got rejected for violence. xD Yeah, having someone impaled....
Wow, there was a lot of timing involved in creating this! I think you synched every beat.
To be honest, I'm not drawn to action vids or heavy music per se... so I'll mention some things I noticed, but take it with a grain of salt... it was almost as if they were dancing. I think it would have been nice to have played up that theme, like showing footage of someone listening to headphones (but that probably doesn't exist in the anime). Also, the way the anime were different quality in terms of edge line of the characters grated on me a bit. Like Naruto had very thick lines compared to the others. The only variety seemed to be at the end when Sasuke said something, and it would have been nice to have something different along the way.
Wow, there was a lot of timing involved in creating this! I think you synched every beat.
To be honest, I'm not drawn to action vids or heavy music per se... so I'll mention some things I noticed, but take it with a grain of salt... it was almost as if they were dancing. I think it would have been nice to have played up that theme, like showing footage of someone listening to headphones (but that probably doesn't exist in the anime). Also, the way the anime were different quality in terms of edge line of the characters grated on me a bit. Like Naruto had very thick lines compared to the others. The only variety seemed to be at the end when Sasuke said something, and it would have been nice to have something different along the way.