Carnival Phantasm Make it rain

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Toastado
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Carnival Phantasm Make it rain

Post by Toastado » Mon Jan 13, 2014 3:52 pm



Here it is, I'm worried there might have been some desync with this file or something is going on weird with the speed somewhere. maybe I'm just paranoid.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LQn4UW3XZ-0

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Replay Studios
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Re: Carnival Phantasm Make it rain

Post by Replay Studios » Tue Jan 14, 2014 9:21 pm

although you need to work on a lot of things. timing, lip sync, etc. it did make me laugh XD great job ^^

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Re: Carnival Phantasm Make it rain

Post by Tearx » Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:11 pm

LOL omg.. I laughed so hard when this started. Awesome combination XD
Editing and scene choice in the beginning was awesome. As it went on the flow got really awkward.
not too sure if you were going for lip sync or if it was lip flap, but if it is lip sync it needs a lot of work.

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I definitely recommend compressing to x264 in a mp4 file! We have lots of programs that can do this for you like Zarxgui, which is located in the useful file section of the org!
Overall, I still found it funny so good job and keep it up! :up:
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Re: Carnival Phantasm Make it rain

Post by LawRayLiet » Fri Jan 24, 2014 11:16 pm

The beginning was much better then the latter half, which didn't seem to add much imo.
If you would've perhaps taken some of the better scenes from the latter half, mixed it into the beginning and ended it around 40sec, it might have been really good.
40 seconds of great video is better then 40 seconds of pretty good and almost a minute of linger. At least that's how I look at it.

Still, a pretty funny start, so nice job.

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