Fighting Furies
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Phlashbak
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Fighting Furies
This is my first time using AMV announcements, pls be gentle.
Any feedback would be appreciated, I want to improve and learn from mistakes so feel free to critique.
I'm aware that I made a mistake with the source and have submitted an edit description request.
Last edited by Phlashbak on Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Rice
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Replay Studios
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Re: Fighting Furies
not bad and welcome to the amv announcements 
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Kireblue
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Re: Fighting Furies
I really liked the story that you portrayed, and the editing was pretty solid. 
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Tearx
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Re: Fighting Furies
Great storytelling, really set a good atmosphere.
I was not a fan of the cross fades, simple cuts would have sufficed since the cross fades were too quick that it somewhat took away from the story depiction. The twitch used seemed very out of place as well. Even though the beginning was slow I really liked how it picked up towards the end (Love the song).
Overall, I enjoyed it so good job
I was not a fan of the cross fades, simple cuts would have sufficed since the cross fades were too quick that it somewhat took away from the story depiction. The twitch used seemed very out of place as well. Even though the beginning was slow I really liked how it picked up towards the end (Love the song).
Overall, I enjoyed it so good job
