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Post by OtakuForLife » Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:59 pm

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Man what to say about this video...

I wanted a sincere romance video with heavy over tones and
not just a bunch of endless face shots. This video has been a lot
of work and my first real experience with transition tuning. Normally
I stay clear of FX when it comes to romance but this time I embraced
them as well..

I tired to stay true to the song and the source without cheapening
ether...I hope you feel the same way
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Re: R.

Post by [madaraxD] » Tue Sep 10, 2013 6:56 pm

Your transitions are a bit rought and some scenes are too long but overall you did a good job, i found it cute and funny sometimes <3 also...this song seems hard to edit D: at least for me so kudos for that :up:
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Re: R.

Post by OtakuForLife » Tue Sep 10, 2013 8:22 pm

Some scenes are a bit long due focusing too much on storytelling and atmosphere which
I have a tendency to do. I was constantly at war between a constant story pacing and the
beat pacing :)

Also I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Re: R.

Post by lloyd9988 » Wed Sep 11, 2013 2:11 am

Admittedly, this is a hard anime to edit with. It has a heck of a good opening and good ending, but the show is just..... ugh....

Anyway, what to say.... Flow could be improved, transitions were good at times and bad at others. Song is also hard to edit with, so to edit with this song along with this anime is pretty rough unless you use some other sources to help you out. I did like that this was more of a comedic romantic pacing rather than the tragic pacing that the anime 'attempted' to portray (I say attempt cause I think they just utterly failed at making it much more romantic and heart-felt than it was.). But, other than that, I think you did a decent job with this amv. Could be improved but, eh, whatevs.
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Re: R.

Post by OtakuForLife » Wed Sep 11, 2013 2:56 am

I've been doing amv's for a while now.. But I stuck to phade and straight cutting.
Playing with transitions and some heavy filtering was trying to get out of my safe zone.
I mean if your not challenging yourself what's the point. Alas we can only build from
experience :)
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Re: R.

Post by bombush » Thu Sep 12, 2013 1:20 am

As much as I'm a sucker for perfect sync, this actually worked somehow. So great job on the storytelling.
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Re: R.

Post by OtakuForLife » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:40 am

bombush wrote:As much as I'm a sucker for perfect sync, this actually worked somehow. So great job on the storytelling.
Thank you! I really love the telling stories part of AMV making..
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