I did feel some of the scenes such as maps with the paths, the running ones with Horo and Lawrence and the buildings burning nearer the end didn't quite work as well as the rest. To me they didn't blend as well with the era-theme like the rest and sorta took away from your concept. Maybe it's just me but I felt the chorus lacked some dynamics to hold up with the fast pacing of the song, though as mentioned before my vision of the song involved a lot of flashing lights so maybe that's why I think it's sorta slow.
That being said I really loved the parchment drawing effect around 1:19, it has a really nice mood to it and the papery-style reminds me of the type of paper they used back in that era. The first section with the black and white scenary also gave the "old-age" style a fine touch which was pretty nice too.
Overall I liked it!
And congrats on your win! ^^