Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo 2012

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Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo 2012

Post by TritioAFB » Sat Jul 07, 2012 1:17 pm

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It's time for the Japan Expo. Since the finalists are coming tomorrow, it's time for me to bring my entry.
The story of No.6 related again :book:

Special thanks to my testers: AimoAio, Castrojimenez2, Daaf, MystykAMV and VovanKoperativ :dino:
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Re: Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo

Post by Hikado95 » Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:35 pm

Al inicio se me hizo un poco confuzo el como empezo, pero despues fue tomando forma. A partir de 0:34 se fue notando tu mismo error que en el akroos , zoom rapidas y efectos que fueron inesesarios y muy crudos como en el 1:08 - 1:10 / 2:22 - 2:27
Generalmente le falto mas tecnica y ambiente, el concepto se entiende claramente y no me quejo de ello.

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Re: Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo

Post by TritioAFB » Sun Jul 08, 2012 8:34 pm

Debo corregir varios de los aspectos previo al AC, dado que el video que viene alli representa algo mas que un video :bear:
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Re: Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo

Post by Eake4 » Sun Jul 08, 2012 9:05 pm

A different editing style?... wait no It came back halfway through the AMV :awesome:
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Re: Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo

Post by Mkid » Sun Jul 08, 2012 9:20 pm

ive been waiting for someone to edit to this song! and basically 6 other songs by them...\
Edit: Let me watch the video before i tell you i like it :up:
Edit 2:it wasn't bad, i feel like there was suppose to be a story but from the 2 times ive seen this it didn't hit.
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Post by Hikado95 » Sun Jul 08, 2012 9:48 pm

TritioAFB wrote:Debo corregir varios de los aspectos previo al AC, dado que el video que viene alli representa algo mas que un video :bear:
no sabes cuanto me gustaria ver un AMV tuyo en donde saques todo de si =)
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Post by AimoAio » Mon Jul 09, 2012 8:11 pm

I think I already mentioned before that I think your mask transitions + zooms felt pretty rough. They're not bad per se, just not very smooth but I can live with it. XD And I would have liked a few more fades at times to break up the AMV since it felt very long with just hardcuts, especially in areas where the scenes are very static. Some more pan movements in those sections might have worked too.

You did have some really nice effects in there though, I particularly enjoyed the first part of the AMV. :up:

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Re: Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo

Post by ibabrak » Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:59 am

AimoAio wrote:I think I already mentioned before that I think your mask transitions + zooms felt pretty rough. They're not bad per se, just not very smooth but I can live with it. XD And I would have liked a few more fades at times to break up the AMV since it felt very long with just hardcuts, especially in areas where the scenes are very static. Some more pan movements in those sections might have worked too.
I agree with this critique.

Nonetheless, I did enjoy it especially since I've yet to see any other good amvs with this source.
Good job :)
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Re: Let me Know (Avenencia) - TritioAFB - [ZA] - Japan Expo

Post by irriadin » Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:29 am

I agree with the others on the mask transitions, they seemed a little rough. That being said, the video is enjoyable enough. Nothing extremely amazing, but it's fun to watch.

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Post by -Kyros- » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:47 pm

Personally I liked it and maybe it could have been selected for the Favourites, in my opinion. Some little defects apart, like the distortions, some zooms etc. the amv is pretty smooth and I liked the way you told the story, is really understandable although I haven't seen the anime. Definitively a good work. :up:
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