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Until We Die
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Centurione
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Re: Until We Die
Not bad, but I think it's generally too static. Music is not as slow as your video. You should have turned the pacing up. And actually, have you edited the part at the end at all? Because it looks like you've put this pretty epilogue scene from Byousoku 5 cm and just left it as it was. Also, I didn't feel much connection between the lyrics and what was happening on the screen.
Anyway, that was quite nice and enjoyable. Keep on improving!
I powodzenia w konkursie
Anyway, that was quite nice and enjoyable. Keep on improving!
I powodzenia w konkursie
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Ryni0
- Joined: Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:52 pm
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Re: Until We Die
Like someone said on YT, I should do more dynamic video like from 2:03. Well, I'm rly lazy and did not my best on this vid, used random song what I liked atm. To be honest I did this 50/50... Tho I'm glad you kinda like it. Dzięki.Centurione wrote:Not bad, but I think it's generally too static. Music is not as slow as your video. You should have turned the pacing up. And actually, have you edited the part at the end at all? Because it looks like you've put this pretty epilogue scene from Byousoku 5 cm and just left it as it was. Also, I didn't feel much connection between the lyrics and what was happening on the screen.
Anyway, that was quite nice and enjoyable. Keep on improving!
I powodzenia w konkursie
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[madaraxD]
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Ryni0
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Re: Until We Die
Thx madara-chan for beta testing ![madaraxD] wrote:Glad to see this here man, really like the final result
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[madaraxD]
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Re: Until We Die
i guess..you mean sama?Ryni0 wrote:Thx madara-chan for beta testing ![madaraxD] wrote:Glad to see this here man
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Ryni0
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Re: Until We Die
haha, right[madaraxD] wrote:i guess..you mean sama?Ryni0 wrote:Thx madara-chan for beta testing ![madaraxD] wrote:Glad to see this here man