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pacotacoshell
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Into the Light

Post by pacotacoshell » Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:31 pm

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I think this was my first shot at a romance AMV, which was about 4 months ago. I did this right after I watched the anime, I freaking loved it. ;-; Anyways, I just wanted to announce this because I barely see any Toradora vids and I kind of like how mine turned out >< Even though there are a lot of parts with lip flap and crappy cuts xD Hope you enjoy :D
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Re: Into the Light

Post by Emong » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:34 am

It was pretty cute. You already mentioned lip flap and "crappy cuts", but I think the main problem with this was the random collection of clips. I've seen the anime, so I do know the context of the clips, but in spite of that it's good to establish at least some sort of a narrative or certain themes/motifs to go with. Now watching this was like "Ok, the guy is rescuing her from drowning..no wait! It's..err..snowing? Oh, now she's arguing with a random red haired girl.. Wait what? They're in another random place again.." You don't need to be in a hurry to randomly change the scenes all the time ;)
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Re: Into the Light

Post by pacotacoshell » Sun Feb 19, 2012 11:12 am

Emong wrote:It was pretty cute. You already mentioned lip flap and "crappy cuts", but I think the main problem with this was the random collection of clips. I've seen the anime, so I do know the context of the clips, but in spite of that it's good to establish at least some sort of a narrative or certain themes/motifs to go with. Now watching this was like "Ok, the guy is rescuing her from drowning..no wait! It's..err..snowing? Oh, now she's arguing with a random red haired girl.. Wait what? They're in another random place again.." You don't need to be in a hurry to randomly change the scenes all the time ;)
xD I get what you mean. Well in my head at the time, it was more like "I need to compile every sad crying scene of Taiga in the bridge NO MATTER WHAT" Again this was also with little to no knowledge about AMVs >< I think I'm less random with my clip choices now in my newer stuff. but I do appreciate the comment! and thanks for watching! :awesome:
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Re: Into the Light

Post by xDreww » Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:25 am

Thought it was a bit cute. It dragged a little though, with clips being a bit to long around the 1st half. Maybe it's just me, not liking the song and being a bit bored with it =/
It's not bad of a video though, just felt a bit draggy and slow. I sort of felt the emotion in it.
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