The End of My World

xDieguitoAMV · Post by **xDieguitoAMV** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 7:10 am

Video:

TritioAFB · Post by **TritioAFB** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 9:18 am

A pesar de que aun no lo comento en la ZA:
La historia me ha parecido interesante, siendo Clannad, sigue la atmosfera planeada en el anime.
Commenting later with more details, need to check it again

AimoAio · Post by **AimoAio** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 9:58 am

That was a pretty nice re-telling of the story.

And the idea came off clear and easy to see which is good. Sadly the font isn't very sophisticated but the style in which it was integrated into the video was done well so it wasn't really a big problem. I also felt some of your fast zooms near the end was a bit overkill and would have looked better just as overlays instead. Still it was really enjoyable to watch! ^^ Oh and neat colouring.

xDreww · Post by **xDreww** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 11:52 am

AimoAio wrote:That was a pretty nice re-telling of the story. And the idea came off clear and easy to see which is good. Sadly the font isn't very sophisticated but the style in which it was integrated into the video was done well so it wasn't really a big problem. I also felt some of your fast zooms near the end was a bit overkill and would have looked better just as overlays instead. Still it was really enjoyable to watch! ^^ Oh and neat colouring.

As I said on youtube, I agree with the Font, and some of your shakes and zoomes. More for the shakes..I'm a bit picky when it comes to that. Other than that.. coloring is beautiful. Great job on it, editing, amazing. Loved it. I feel a bit inspired again to work on more instrumental videos. :3
4/5

Kairih · Post by **Kairih** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 12:18 pm

I.... love this one. Gave me so many emotions. I HAVE to see the anime now.
Really, congrats, this video is really amazing in my point of view.

xDieguitoAMV · Post by **xDieguitoAMV** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 5:28 pm

Thanks for all the comments!!!, im gonna try to improve all this things and try not to use so many zooms

AceD · Post by **AceD** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 6:01 pm

Nice!, sucker for Clannad videos

Shin-AMV · Post by **Shin-AMV** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 6:59 pm

I enjoyed that. I agree with whats been said about the font, it could have been a classier or more sophisticated looking font, or could have really just been left out entirely. I liked the majority of zooms, but a few of them didn't match the strength of the note at some parts, but that seemed more or less a minor issue. Really nice coloring and the soft haziness created a nice atmosphere.

xDieguitoAMV · Post by **xDieguitoAMV** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 7:49 pm

Shin-AMV wrote:I enjoyed that. I agree with whats been said about the font, it could have been a classier or more sophisticated looking font, or could have really just been left out entirely. I liked the majority of zooms, but a few of them didn't match the strength of the note at some parts, but that seemed more or less a minor issue. Really nice coloring and the soft haziness created a nice atmosphere.

Thank you, im glad you enjoy it.

Taite · Post by **Taite** » Wed Feb 01, 2012 8:10 pm

There are things I could nitpick at, like some iffy shakes maybe, I don't know. But I prefer not to in this case. It's a really solid amv and I don't feel mentioning the little things really matters; first time watching it, I had no big complaints, so why bother.

Just to be positively constructive though: In my opinion, I don't think you need to cut back on zooms. Honestly, they were fine. They were well-placed, that's all that matters. I'm personally a fan of the zooms at the end, particularly. I think these might be the ones Aimo referred to as overkill, but I think it was well done; in comparison to the slower parts, it added a lot of impact for a great climax, giving me metaphorical chills. The text was alright; it was a lot better than some cheesy, nasty cursive font. I think if it were a bit thinner and just a bit less typical-arial-looking kind of font, then it would have been perfect. Either way, it was alright, and didn't bother me in the least. The atmosphere and impact was dead on throughout the entire video, transitions were smooth, and the story clear.

Hope you don't mistake my positive criticism as lacking constructiveness; in my honest opinion, it was well done, and any changes I'd make to your video would be something I'd make as an editor, not as a viewer.
(I always feel the need to add this, for some reason, as I'm typically a harsh critic.)

Nicely done!
P.S. I wanted to speak in Spanish, but I believe that I need more practice to speak better. ): Quería hablar en español, pero creo que me falta practicar más para hablar mejor

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