Gomen ne, Tomoyo

[alien762]

[CodeZTM]

*I wasn't fond of the credits that were overlaid in the beginning. Just makes it less appealing to look at, and isn't very professional.

*You captured the emotions of the song well, and I thought editing-wise, you kept it pretty interesting. I liked the subtle effects/slides that were thrown in, because they added a nice element to the AMV to make it more entertaining in the second half.

*Concept-wise, I'm glad to see a Clannad AMV that isn't about the typical pairing.

*One of the few times where I think the lip flap was endearing.

*I think 5 minutes is a bit much, but it was pretty entertaining, so I won't dock you for that.

Overall, I enjoyed it. I think it was cute, captured the emotions well, and integrated a lot of neat things into it. I'm just not that big of a fan of Clannad, which I guess is why I'm not as gushing as I would be otherwise. XD

Nice job.

[alien762]

Happy new year to all

Thank you very much for your comment .
Credits...Dammit, another time i commited this error. I will follow your advices for the next (First, more short and i hope without credits! )

[EkaCoralian]

Basically everything that Code said; also I think you could've brought down the brightness of your flashes a little when you used them (especially in the beginning. I know they're used for emphasis in the song, but not /that/ much emphasis. xD)
Lovely clip choices and timing though!