*You captured the emotions of the song well, and I thought editing-wise, you kept it pretty interesting. I liked the subtle effects/slides that were thrown in, because they added a nice element to the AMV to make it more entertaining in the second half.
*Concept-wise, I'm glad to see a Clannad AMV that isn't about the typical pairing.
*One of the few times where I think the lip flap was endearing.

*I think 5 minutes is a bit much, but it was pretty entertaining, so I won't dock you for that.
Overall, I enjoyed it. I think it was cute, captured the emotions well, and integrated a lot of neat things into it. I'm just not that big of a fan of Clannad, which I guess is why I'm not as gushing as I would be otherwise. XD
Nice job.
