I Miss You (School Days)

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I Miss You (School Days)

Post by peppy_heppy » Mon Dec 19, 2011 9:59 am

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Video: I Miss You
Category: Drama, Romance, Character Profile, Serious
Anime: School Days
Song: You (unreleased track)
Artist: Lena Katina (former t.A.T.u. member)
Creator: peppy_heppy

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My first time. I'm not really into making AMVs, but I certainly felt this song was asking for an AMV of the anime "School Days". I dedicate it to all the heartbroken souls out there... So um... enjoy! I would be interested to receive feedback. =)
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Re: I Miss You (School Days)

Post by CodeZTM » Tue Dec 27, 2011 10:19 am

Huge school days fan, so I'm glad I snagged this one. (Sorry it's a few days late. Christmas hit me pretty hard)

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Anyway, I'm sorry that this might be your last AMV. :( But I'll still give a review.

You hit the mood/lyrics of the song pretty well, but I felt like the editing of it could have been improved upon. Cuts between wildly different scenes could have used some fades, especially with a song slow like this, and I felt like you could have used some work in the scene selection department. By this, I mean that some scenes really didn't fit all that well. Such at at 1:56, where I didn't really understand why the phone was just sitting there.

Overall, I'll keep this short, but I do think there's some potential here. I hope that you keep going, and you're always welcome here for feedback!

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Re: I Miss You (School Days)

Post by peppy_heppy » Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:22 am

CodeZTM wrote:Huge school days fan, so I'm glad I snagged this one. (Sorry it's a few days late. Christmas hit me pretty hard)

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Anyway, I'm sorry that this might be your last AMV. :( But I'll still give a review.

You hit the mood/lyrics of the song pretty well, but I felt like the editing of it could have been improved upon. Cuts between wildly different scenes could have used some fades, especially with a song slow like this, and I felt like you could have used some work in the scene selection department. By this, I mean that some scenes really didn't fit all that well. Such at at 1:56, where I didn't really understand why the phone was just sitting there.

Overall, I'll keep this short, but I do think there's some potential here. I hope that you keep going, and you're always welcome here for feedback!
A big thank you for the feedback. <3 I really appreciate it. Maybe it won't be my last one, but if a really good inspiration hits me about a song and a corresponding anime, I will continue with the AMV-making. :up: I really did enjoy making it, I made it all in one breath, cause I couldn't wait to see it as a whole. :sweat: So, thanks for the ideas. =) Next time I'll definitely use more sophisticated editing. Dattebayo! ^^
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Re: I Miss You (Schhttp://www.animemusicvideos.org/foruool D

Post by Tearx » Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:37 pm

this gave me chills! you portrayed their feelings really well. (Such a messed up anime ><)

Editing wise, it could have been spiced up a bit more (faster cuts etc. ) to keep the viewers attention
However, for a first amv this is really good! I'll be looking out for your future videos =]
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Re: I Miss You (Schhttp://www.animemusicvideos.org/foruool D

Post by peppy_heppy » Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:51 pm

Tearx wrote:this gave me chills! you portrayed their feelings really well. (Such a messed up anime ><)

Editing wise, it could have been spiced up a bit more (faster cuts etc. ) to keep the viewers attention
However, for a first amv this is really good! I'll be looking out for your future videos =]
Why, thank you! *hugs* I personally especially liked the dramatic and psychological aspect of the anime and the complicated plot. :roll:
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Re: I Miss You (School Days)

Post by lloyd9988 » Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:18 pm

*hugs* xD I'm so glad to know that you did your first AMV for School Days! :D

The vid is pretty neat, and, for your first video, I'm glad to know that you didn't use any text or subtitles! Gewd Job :dino:

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Re: I Miss You (School Days)

Post by peppy_heppy » Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:36 pm

lloyd9988 wrote:*hugs* xD I'm so glad to know that you did your first AMV for School Days! :D

The vid is pretty neat, and, for your first video, I'm glad to know that you didn't use any text or subtitles! Gewd Job :dino:
*hugs back* Thanks a lot! =^.^= Sounds encouraging :D And yeah, I got hold of the raw version particularly for the purpose of making the AMV.
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