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Concordia - TritioAFB - [ZA]

Post by TritioAFB » Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:05 am

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The Alternative name for the episode II of My Story series.
Hope you enjoy the video. And Merry Christmas to all :up:



Remastered V of an old MAD :asd:
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Re: Concordia - TritioAFB - [ZA]

Post by lloyd9988 » Sun Dec 25, 2011 4:08 am

imo, it needs an emotional connection :P

Its got a good story to it but its a little bit hard to understand and it could've been better. However, I still think this was done pretty well. :shark:

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Post by Shin-AMV » Sun Dec 25, 2011 4:42 pm

Really good lip syncing in it. It has a really smooth flow throughout too. The story was a little vague to me and I think you could have trimmed down a few of the lip syncing scenes to reinforce the story elements a little. I enjoyed it nonetheless. :up:
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Post by l33tmeatwad » Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:47 pm

Good video, enjoyed it :)!
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Post by CodeZTM » Mon Dec 26, 2011 1:23 pm

I loved it! You did a nice job with combining masking, lip sync and storytelling. Pretty nice crossover (you do really well with that!), and while the story was a little on the farfetched style, you still did a really nice job. Just a very fitting combination that worked well and fit the music almost perfectly.

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Post by [madaraxD] » Mon Dec 26, 2011 2:02 pm

you know tritio..i love it :up:, It was really interesting to watch a good story using this anime
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Post by TritioAFB » Tue Dec 27, 2011 9:45 am

imo, it needs an emotional connection

Its got a good story to it but its a little bit hard to understand and it could've been better. However, I still think this was done pretty well.
Yeah, for me it was hard to do a story with just 1 episode but I still manage to do something :up:
Really good lip syncing in it. It has a really smooth flow throughout too. The story was a little vague to me and I think you could have trimmed down a few of the lip syncing scenes to reinforce the story elements a little. I enjoyed it nonetheless.
Actually I could, but didn't have more useful scenes, the ones left were about talking, so I decided to keep it like that :)
Good video, enjoyed it !
Thank you very much :asd:
I loved it! You did a nice job with combining masking, lip sync and storytelling. Pretty nice crossover (you do really well with that!), and while the story was a little on the farfetched style, you still did a really nice job. Just a very fitting combination that worked well and fit the music almost perfectly.
Actually I tend to admire crossover stories, and with the new animes I got recently, I'm planning to even add more animes to a single vid. Thanks for the help in the betatesting
you know tritio..i love it , It was really interesting to watch a good story using this anime
Yes, people tends to believe that just because this is an ecchi anime, it can't be made something sentimental for it. Thanks for your help

Aimo, if you're reading this, I wanted to keep this video as a surprise for you. After all you've been helping a lot this year, so I decided to let you rest for this one :)
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Re: Concordia - TritioAFB - [ZA]

Post by TritioAFB » Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:26 pm

Just added a new MAD since I have now the conditions to remaster several proyects
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Post by AimoAio » Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:54 pm

I felt like the story could have been stronger, or reinforced better if you focused a bit more on the emotions/feelings aspect rather than lipsync for part of the video. That being said, I did like watching it and I always find it amazing how you can do such perfect crossover videos. Damn that awesome masking and colour correction! :rofl:

Anyway good job Tritio. :up:
TritioAFB wrote:Aimo, if you're reading this, I wanted to keep this video as a surprise for you. After all you've been helping a lot this year, so I decided to let you rest for this one :)
Haha and a nice surprise it was! I knew you were working on it but I never knew it was finished so when I saw it being announced I was like "..wait..wha..?! It's already finished?!" XD

Edit: Getting the M@D video now.

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Post by TritioAFB » Thu Dec 29, 2011 10:53 am

I understand it. My biggest complain was that the creators of Asobi didn't make an additional episode of Rauri (The white dressed lady) and I just couldn't say something like: It's impossible to make a video with 1 episode. And the talking and talking moments didn't seem too motivational, so seemed the only way was to use a lot of lip synch different to other videos I've made before.

Personally I took it like a challenge: making a video with approximately 8 useful minutes. So at first I wanted to recreate the exact story of the anime, but after lacking scenes I went to search animes, and I found the other one. I was surprised the way I blend them together, so I found the motivation to complete the video. After all I told Squall(c): I'll finish this video before AKROSS Con 2011 ends, and I did it :)
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