so guys this is my newest AMV, and i think it turned out very good. What do you think?
Naruto & Sasuke - Broken Bonds
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TheMightyHokage
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Naruto & Sasuke - Broken Bonds
so guys this is my newest AMV, and i think it turned out very good. What do you think?
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CodeZTM
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Re: Naruto & Sasuke - Broken Bonds
The Criticisms:
I think it was a little too static at times [not having enough movement on screen], and the blank spaces kind of killed the mood at times. It also needed a stronger connection between the music and the video [sync-wise], since it kind of felt like they were two separate entities. I also think you should really take a look at your scene selection. Some of the scenes [ESPECIALLY at the beginning and ending] were extremely long and needed more cuts to bring about a better story development.
The Praises
I understood your concept, and the concept came through. 2:21-2:45 was really well done, and I think you captured that moment in a very powerful way.
The Suggestions:
I might suggest this lovely read, because it gives a lot of useful advice on syncing and other elements of AMV editing that everyone can gain from. It also has a lot of good editing theories and is extremely well written.
For a second AMV, it wasn't too bad. Keep on improving with each AMV, and you'll do just fine. And don't forget to have fun with it!
I think it was a little too static at times [not having enough movement on screen], and the blank spaces kind of killed the mood at times. It also needed a stronger connection between the music and the video [sync-wise], since it kind of felt like they were two separate entities. I also think you should really take a look at your scene selection. Some of the scenes [ESPECIALLY at the beginning and ending] were extremely long and needed more cuts to bring about a better story development.
The Praises
I understood your concept, and the concept came through. 2:21-2:45 was really well done, and I think you captured that moment in a very powerful way.
The Suggestions:
I might suggest this lovely read, because it gives a lot of useful advice on syncing and other elements of AMV editing that everyone can gain from. It also has a lot of good editing theories and is extremely well written.
For a second AMV, it wasn't too bad. Keep on improving with each AMV, and you'll do just fine. And don't forget to have fun with it!
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TheMightyHokage
- Joined: Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:18 pm
Re: Naruto & Sasuke - Broken Bonds
Yeah people have been complaining about the black spacesCodeZTM wrote:The Criticisms:
I think it was a little too static at times [not having enough movement on screen], and the blank spaces kind of killed the mood at times. It also needed a stronger connection between the music and the video [sync-wise], since it kind of felt like they were two separate entities. I also think you should really take a look at your scene selection. Some of the scenes [ESPECIALLY at the beginning and ending] were extremely long and needed more cuts to bring about a better story development.
The Praises
I understood your concept, and the concept came through. 2:21-2:45 was really well done, and I think you captured that moment in a very powerful way.
The Suggestions:
I might suggest this lovely read, because it gives a lot of useful advice on syncing and other elements of AMV editing that everyone can gain from. It also has a lot of good editing theories and is extremely well written.
For a second AMV, it wasn't too bad. Keep on improving with each AMV, and you'll do just fine. And don't forget to have fun with it!
I should stop doing that hahah 
and I've read the guide now.. And will use it for my next AMV Thx for the feedback!