Hm, well I probably did add more layers than needed - I know I consciously did it towards the end just to make it meld with the beginning.

As I said, a lot of that sort of thing was just to see how looked and interacted, etc...
CodeZTM - You mentioned coherency particularly with the introduction. I feel part of this most likely comes from painting in broad strokes as it were, but I'm wondering if you felt there was something in particularly I could have done with the introduction that would have been more... suitable?
Thanks everyone for taking a look - I appreciate the comments
