DBZ Broly - Bleeding Is A Luxury

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Noir X Weiss
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DBZ Broly - Bleeding Is A Luxury

Post by Noir X Weiss » Sun May 22, 2011 4:42 pm

Here's my second AMV, yet another Broly AMV.



Enjoy! Lemme know what you guys think of this video!

Here's the YouTube link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RTSnsZYG740
Last edited by Noir X Weiss on Sun May 22, 2011 9:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: DBZ Broly - Bleeding Is A Luxury

Post by CodeZTM » Sun May 22, 2011 5:19 pm

Personally, I thought your editing was a little slow for the pace of the song and was lacking in appropriate cuts. The song and anime just didn't seem to go together and didn't march the beat/flow of the song. Your visual quality was surprisingly good for WMV, but it could still be improved upon.

But it did have some traces of sync and you made a good attempt for it just being your second amv. The ending was also pretty well put together and had some nice closure.

I suggest checking out some other action videos and seeing how they put their videos together. That's one of the best ways to learn how to edit better. :D

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Re: DBZ Broly - Bleeding Is A Luxury

Post by Noir X Weiss » Sun May 22, 2011 6:05 pm

thanks for the input :)

when i was about halfway through i felt like there weren't really enough scenes i wanted, and i messed up some parts, but decided to just finish it since i could always go back and remake it. hopefully my next try will be better. i plan on doing a tribute to either Ali Al-Saachez or Graham Aker from Gundam 00 when i'm done rewatching. :D

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