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by Kitsuner » Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:16 am
I liked it. You drew your parallels clearly, and a lot of the foley integrated seamlessly. The cuts during dialogue felt off-kilter sometimes when you changed the angle of the speaker mid-sentence. I also thought the translucent WB logo looked weird, since it's officially shown as opaque. One solution would have been to mask it out, but I think it would have worked just as well with it completely removed. You could also show a parody logo or one for Studio DEEN to further link the sources. Similarly, the final shot where the title is shown would have really sold your concept if you'd mocked up a screen that read "The Iron Hero". Good work.
ps - Is Hogarth's Heroman-double a boy or a girl? <_<
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