Gsg one by one my second amv

[blaksun]

Hope that there is no big no-no or F**k up’s in this one.
tell me what i can do better and if I done something stupid
I look forward to see what you think of this amv

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=178959

[Kireblue]

I feel basically the same way that I felt about your first AMV. It lacks beat and internal sync, and your scenes don't really match the pace of the song. In other words, there are moments in the song where the mood and tempo dramatically change, but your video doesn't do the same.

For example, the violin scene with Henrietta was far too long, and it happened during a time when you should have been trying to set the stage for a battle scene. The lyric sync that you used with the "today I killed a boy" part was a good idea though

[blaksun]

Ok i see what you mien wet the violin clip it shut have been at least 10sek. Shorter but wean i woes making it i woes more tanking about the lip sync and as far as I see it spot on expect for the grey clip in the end and that woes probes.
Hope it don’t look lick random clips?

and i will start working on my lacks beat and internal sync