[Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by Cenit » Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:52 am

Decent editing. Song annoys me pretty fast, but i like the general mood. Also good use of effects. Well done! :up:
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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by S.A. Robert » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:32 pm

Clip very much, technical work, revised periodically. The author is well done, good job.
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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by Moonlight Soldier » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:39 pm

I liked your effects and the K-on girl stuff (never seen so I don't know the name) but overall nothing felt connected in this video to me so I had a hard time getting into it.

Congrats on yer win though |:>

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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by Moonlight Soldier » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:39 pm

I liked your effects and the K-on girl stuff (never seen so I don't know the name) but overall nothing felt connected in this video to me so I had a hard time getting into it.

Congrats on yer win though |:>

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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by Radical_Yue » Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:13 pm

Oh hey! Riot Gear and stock arrows! :D Neato!

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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by LittleAtari » Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:09 pm

Radical_Yue wrote:Oh hey! Riot Gear and stock arrows! :D Neato!
Like the standard fx that come with an editing program but from somewhere else... o and nobody cares. The strength of this video is in the scene selection and editing. I liked the color work and masks also. Honestly, 90% of the video is not Riot Gear and stock arrows. There's obviously a lot more to the video than just that.

Good job JadeCharm, I think you definitely make more dance videos in the future. This did turn out better than the first dance video made (at least in my opinion). I would say that you should look into working on expanding your font library since you do seem to use text in quite a bit of your videos and I feel like that does need a little work.

Also, i thought the first poster was funny. At first I was like "what the heck is up with this poster" and then I realized that you put your own picture in there with Little Boots XD, so i was like "definitely /gets"

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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by gotenks794 » Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:16 pm

JadeCharm wrote: and I was surprised about how much I won.
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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by Kousaka » Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:52 pm

That was amazing! ^^ :up:
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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by godix » Sat Sep 18, 2010 10:54 pm

I really like the color work, I'd just rather see it in a different video than this. I don't think it really fit with the song much, especially all the B&W. Decent editing and obviously work was put into parts of this, but it's just to slow paced.
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Re: [Connichi 2010 1st place] Confession To The Dancefloor

Post by JadeCharm » Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:11 am

Ileia wrote:I actually didn't like this one. It didn't feel like it suited the mood of the song at all.
strange that the mood you get from the song is so totally different from mine
too bad that you couldn't get into it
but thank you for your comment!!
EvaFan wrote:I really like this song, never heard it before. Enjoyed this quite a bit. Only complaint really was some of the FX. Not sure how to say it, like they were forced or something. Usually when I'm watching dance vids, the fx just enhance the video, sync, and style but while watching this one some of them felt overly obvious or something (terrible explanation prolly, for example though: the spinning arrows). Anyway it was a good watch |:> .

4/5
think I know what you mean. I just needed something to sync the arrow-parts and I thought that arrows would do well
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Cenit wrote:Decent editing. Song annoys me pretty fast, but i like the general mood. Also good use of effects. Well done! :up:
yeah someone who says that I did well with the effects! thank you!! :3
S.A. Robert wrote:Clip very much, technical work, revised periodically. The author is well done, good job.
Thanks!
Moonlight Soldier wrote:I liked your effects and the K-on girl stuff (never seen so I don't know the name) but overall nothing felt connected in this video to me so I had a hard time getting into it.

Congrats on yer win though |:>
Do the parts in dance vids have a connection? don't know...didn't really took care of that
Thank you! |:>
Radical_Yue wrote:Oh hey! Riot Gear and stock arrows! :D Neato!
:D
LittleAtari wrote: Good job JadeCharm, I think you definitely make more dance videos in the future. This did turn out better than the first dance video made (at least in my opinion). I would say that you should look into working on expanding your font library since you do seem to use text in quite a bit of your videos and I feel like that does need a little work.
Hm pure dance vids are not my favourite things to edit...they are a lot of work and often I'm too lazy for that :P
yeah...font library...I could try to improve that...or I just try not to use this much font in the future :mrgreen:
Thank you very much for your comment!
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JadeCharm wrote: and I was surprised about how much I won.
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TamaHime09 wrote:That was amazing! ^^ :up:
thank you!
looking forward to our collab...hope we can get it started someday :D
godix wrote:I really like the color work, I'd just rather see it in a different video than this. I don't think it really fit with the song much, especially all the B&W. Decent editing and obviously work was put into parts of this, but it's just to slow paced.
totally different from the opinion I have
but thanks for your comment!
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