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Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by Minimoto » Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:53 pm

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My video is a depiction of Tsundere. If you didn't get it, the title and the last part of the video connect. Hope you enjoy, nothing special but at least nothing bad. And thanks to Ardour for the banner as usual.
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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by CodeZTM » Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:34 pm

kireblue wrote:wheres the video :?
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I WANNA SEE EEET. :D

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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by Minimoto » Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:49 pm

Oh Sheet, why didn't it work?! FIXED!!! I FORGOT TO CONFIRM THE UPLOAD.
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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by CodeZTM » Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:03 am

The Good:
1) It was unique. Not many TD! videos cover this kind of concept with the series.
2) The editing was paced pretty well. The beat was really well kept and adhered to.
3) Pretty excellent scene selection for 90% of the video.
4) THE ENDING WAS FABULOUS. :awesome:

The Bad:
1) You're having to compete with the previous "Unwell" video with Golden Boy that was fantastic. My mind continues to go back to that previous video when watching this one, but it's not your fault, and it's not really "bad", but it keeps creeping into my mind. :uhoh:
2) Visual quality. The black bars on top and bottom would be better cropped off, it had some blocking and I know for a fact that Toradora footage can be much better. It wasn't too distracting, but it's something that could be improved upon.
3) Lip flappage. I know some scenes would be hard to fix, but others were possible.

Pretty good. I can see why it got runner up. :up:

4/5

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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by Minimoto » Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:02 am

Thanks, and congrats on your win too. I can change some lip flappage yes but never have been one to know how to crop off the bars. Quality... I know. But what is blocking?
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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by Minimoto » Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:19 am

kireblue wrote:wheres the video :?
The vids been back so I hope you get to watching it Kire.
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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by AimoAio » Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:12 pm

Didn't like the black and white parts much :\ felt like it was kinda...broken? But other than that it was nice to watch! :up:

Oh and congrats on runner up! :awesome:

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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by JadeCharm » Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:41 pm

Okkkaayyy first thing to say: why did u make a 4:3 video when ur source is 16:9?
Try to figure out how u can change project settings in ur editing program so that ur next video is in the right size
personally I'm not very much bothered by this, but I know there are a lot people who are (bitchin even about very little small boarders at the edges :P )

I don't know why u called the video "What makes a Tsundere" because to me it was more like a normal Romance-Video. Only the end showed what a Tsundere really is. But the song was not a perfect choice to describe what a Tsundere is as well.

Enough with the bad points!! Here are some good ones:
U really have a lot of talent! Though the video wasn't what I expected the scene selection and ur sync was very good! I think if u can manage the quality issues and choose a song that totally fits what u want to say with ur video the result will be somethin GREAT!

lookin forward to ur future works
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Re: Anime-Mid-Atlantic '10 Drama Runner-Up:What Makes a Tsundere

Post by Minimoto » Sun Jun 20, 2010 8:28 pm

JadeCharm wrote:Okkkaayyy first thing to say: why did u make a 4:3 video when ur source is 16:9?
Try to figure out how u can change project settings in ur editing program so that ur next video is in the right size
personally I'm not very much bothered by this, but I know there are a lot people who are (bitchin even about very little small boarders at the edges :P )
When people tell me things like 16:9 and 4:3, which I've been told for a while, all I think is... ????????? I guess I really should read w/e technical guides are available here for these things. Anybody wanna link the best one?
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