Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking ~Clannnad/ M by Ayumi Hamasaki~

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Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking ~Clannnad/ M by Ayumi Hamasaki~

Post by Kenzichu » Fri May 28, 2010 11:23 pm

This amv is kinda based off of a MAD format. I really hope you like it. I have been working on it longer than any of my amvs. Beware. EXTREME SPOILERS FOR CLANNAD AND CLANNAD AFTER STORY, This amv zeros in on each character. Then Nagisa and Tomoyo.

I left out the alternate
Spoiler :
'when Nagisa dies and Tomoyo raises Oshio then she dies too. Sad..Sad...'
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by OtakuGray » Fri May 28, 2010 11:44 pm

Just awesome how this all blended together. Besides some editing flaws...this amv totally sucked me in and got me emotional. Definitely a success. :up:
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by Kimberly » Fri May 28, 2010 11:46 pm

I liked this lots :] Nice job Kenzi !

Atfirst I didn't really like the text.. but near the end I thought it worked pretty well. (=
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by Minimoto » Fri May 28, 2010 11:47 pm

Getting it now. I haven't seen your videos in a long time. Everyone keeps saying you improved by leaps and bounds so I gotta check it out.

/Wow, you have gotten a LOT better. Last video I had of yours I said wasn't a keeper but I think I'll leave this one in my AMV folder. But, like everyone else said... those fonts were horrible. They really made my eyes bleed. But great job and I'm glad to see how much you've grown.
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by Nya-chan Production » Fri May 28, 2010 11:49 pm

One orphan frame, solid work, improved quality (a lot!) and stuff.

The worst thing were the fonts - don't mind if you liked them, but the typesetter in me just died a little

4/5 overally because of that D:

And nice recap of both series <3
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by GloryQuestor » Fri May 28, 2010 11:52 pm

Nice M@D-style vid. Wish you did more with the text -- I felt like Nya about it. Otherwise, I enjoyed this a lot. 4/5 |:>
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Post by Jwalk0 » Fri May 28, 2010 11:53 pm

Wow, I've checked out alotta MAD vids and this one is almost as professional as a majority that I've seen. Dedicated work.
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by Kireblue » Sat May 29, 2010 12:16 am

Kenichu + Clannad? How can I resist LOL

Lets see. I feel that each individual part of your AMV was good, but I don't feel that they transitioned very effectively. I see that you changed the focus of the AMV every time that the tempo of the song changed, but each character's part still felt like it abruptly came out of nowhere since the back stories of the characters aren't directly related to each other.

But besides from that, I feel that you did a good job at editing this. Each individual part has very nice flow, and does a good job at maintaining the pace of the song. Oh and, I like the intro and ending although I feel that the intro has a completely different mood than the rest if the AMV.

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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by Kenzichu » Sat May 29, 2010 12:58 am

the fonts are just fonts. Its what they say that is important to me. I played around with some but i wanted them to be readable. I wish i could have done more with them but I'm still learning. Every amv i do will be different from the last. And i will try to improve and learn something new each time. I love this amv. It gives me chills even when i watch it. But after everyone's comments on the font..I mean that was the whole focus of my editing. I apologize if the fonts were hard to see or something I tried to make the fonts simple enough so you could see each letter...Because the song was in Japanese i thought i could finally tell a story. It was very hard to do.
But I'm glad everyone found something to like about it. That is my main goal as an editor.

I wanted to relate the fonts to the characters personality..but please understand the words conveyed. That's all I can ask for..
I still would like to get better, so constructive criticism is welcome.
Please keep the comments coming ^_^
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Re: Kenzichu - Blissful Breaking

Post by Dr. Derpface, J.D. » Sat May 29, 2010 1:10 am

Dunno what to say since I've never seen Clannad, but I liked the way it all came together. :up:
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