Its about losing someone close to you....and yeah its FLCL again lol
When September Ends
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OtakuGray
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When September Ends
A mini i finally got around to announcing
Its about losing someone close to you....and yeah its FLCL again lol
Its about losing someone close to you....and yeah its FLCL again lol
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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CodeZTM
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Re: When September Ends
1) Font needed to be consistent.
2) Visual quality not as perfect as could be.
3) Masking boo-boos here and there.
1) Pretty nice concept, interesting use of text.
2) Excellent font, wished they'd all been white filled and not all different.
3) Nice execution of effects here and there [especially getting rid of characters].
Again, FLCL vids aren't my thing, but I thought it was pretty nice. 4/5
2) Visual quality not as perfect as could be.
3) Masking boo-boos here and there.
1) Pretty nice concept, interesting use of text.
2) Excellent font, wished they'd all been white filled and not all different.
3) Nice execution of effects here and there [especially getting rid of characters].
Again, FLCL vids aren't my thing, but I thought it was pretty nice. 4/5
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OtakuGray
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Re: When September Ends
Thanks code 
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Enigma
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Re: When September Ends
Video felt as if it needed something, You tried to sync the lyrics but it just didn't come out right or as powerful, The shaking just were really distracting and felt really odd, The whole fading out thing was really just annoying and ruined the flow for me, I still have fun times with this song and love FLCL, So it was really hard for me to enjoy this video, But compliments on the masking , Well done.
And whats with the resolution <.<
, Well done.And whats with the resolution <.<
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BurningLeaves
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Re: When September Ends
Sorry, I just didn't get into this all too much. I actually disagree with Code (which is pretty rare) I wasn't a fan of the font. If anything I thought it should have faded in/out more and been less.. Hmm blocky and straight? More flowing... If you can make any sense of that. I didn't really get the theme or story you were trying to tell because I clicked preview before reading your description about loss which makes a bit more sense now. I thought the zooming was a bit too much. I did like your masking and didn't see any issues, but again I watched on preview. With FLCL and a song like this I think you did have limited scene selections but this one just wasn't for me, sorry.
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OtakuGray
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Re: When September Ends
lol im such a flcl whoreBurningLeaves wrote:Sorry, I just didn't get into this all too much. I actually disagree with Code (which is pretty rare) I wasn't a fan of the font. If anything I thought it should have faded in/out more and been less.. Hmm blocky and straight? More flowing... If you can make any sense of that. I didn't really get the theme or story you were trying to tell because I clicked preview before reading your description about loss which makes a bit more sense now. I thought the zooming was a bit too much. I did like your masking and didn't see any issues, but again I watched on preview. With FLCL and a song like this I think you did have limited scene selections but this one just wasn't for me, sorry.
I know all the episodes by heart xD Anyways, i agree about the flowing. It probably would have done better if i had done some kind of font like the beginning of "Twilight" by Koop.
The story is a tad vague...and i think ive refined that in some of my newer amvs...i hope xD
I agree with both you and Code, so thanks to both of ya :3
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Orestes
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Re: When September Ends
Wasn't to bad. I agree with Code, the last mask kind of bugged me. Good job though.
3.5/5
3.5/5
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Kaream
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Re: When September Ends
Think I already told ya before.
I feel as if the editing didn't live up to your concept.
Alot of tweaks/fixing was still left to do.
You chose a good song for flcl. So it wasn't bad
3/5
I feel as if the editing didn't live up to your concept.
Alot of tweaks/fixing was still left to do.
You chose a good song for flcl. So it wasn't bad
3/5
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EkaCoralian
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Re: When September Ends
There were some bits where the timing was off, so that threw off the flow for me. I loved the concept and your masking, though!
I especially liked the scene choice with, "Here comes the rain again." Very fitting, and pretty much perfect.
Not bad, not bad at all. =D
I especially liked the scene choice with, "Here comes the rain again." Very fitting, and pretty much perfect.
Not bad, not bad at all. =D
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OtakuGray
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Re: When September Ends
yay thank youEkaCoralian wrote:There were some bits where the timing was off, so that threw off the flow for me. I loved the concept and your masking, though!
I especially liked the scene choice with, "Here comes the rain again." Very fitting, and pretty much perfect.
Not bad, not bad at all. =D
(b ^3^)bgodix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.