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Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by Wrote » Mon May 03, 2010 4:31 pm

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It takes about a month (more or less) and I'm quite proud of the results.

Quite after an year from my first trailer, this video is for commemorate my first year spent developping this awersome hobby: editing amvs :D

Thanks to everyone that teach me and help me until now ^_^

PS: and forgive my bad english :amv:

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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by SilkAMV » Mon May 03, 2010 5:17 pm

Lol whups, I already did that. Although, you did use a different trailer from me so it's not exactly the same. It was interesting actually. I edited two versions of the beginning of my video (the "I knew your father" scene) and you went with the version that I didn't. You edited that part almost exactly as I did too.
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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by Wrote » Mon May 03, 2010 5:30 pm

well, I'm sorry if it was already done. I started editing only a year ago and before that I didn't even knew what an amv was so it's not my fault for not knowing that silk has already done a "wanted" trailer.
next time I'll try to be more original
Silk_SK wrote:Lol whups, I already did that. Although, you did use a different trailer from me so it's not exactly the same. It was interesting actually. I edited two versions of the beginning of my video (the "I knew your father" scene) and you went with the version that I didn't. You edited that part almost exactly as I did too.
at least it isn't the same XD
seriously, I didn't know that you have done this before D: sorry.

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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by SilkAMV » Mon May 03, 2010 6:02 pm

Lol it's fine. The very first amv I posted here had already been done by someone else too so I know what it's like. As for the video, it was a pretty sweet trailer. For me it was sort of like a "What would have been" video. I considered using that trailer myself and a lot of those clips were originally going to be in my video. It's only natural that some would be the same as well.

But there were a few problems too. Generally it's not a good idea to have things happening on the screen with no noises to go with it. You did take most of the sound effects into consideration but there were a bunch parts like at 1:04 where you had a gun shooting noiselessly. Try to avoid that if you can.

The sound effect at 0:41 didn't match either. The lip sync was just okay for the most part but it went off at parts like :40 and 1:24.

Other than that it was a fairly solid video.
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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by kickass331 » Mon May 03, 2010 8:09 pm

4/5
without outro and reused scene after wanted logo 5/5
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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by Wrote » Tue May 04, 2010 8:27 am

Silk_SK wrote:Lol it's fine. The very first amv I posted here had already been done by someone else too so I know what it's like. As for the video, it was a pretty sweet trailer. For me it was sort of like a "What would have been" video. I considered using that trailer myself and a lot of those clips were originally going to be in my video. It's only natural that some would be the same as well.

But there were a few problems too. Generally it's not a good idea to have things happening on the screen with no noises to go with it. You did take most of the sound effects into consideration but there were a bunch parts like at 1:04 where you had a gun shooting noiselessly. Try to avoid that if you can.

The sound effect at 0:41 didn't match either. The lip sync was just okay for the most part but it went off at parts like :40 and 1:24.

Other than that it was a fairly solid video.
really, thanks for your advices. I'll keep them in mind for my next video :)
kickass331 wrote:4/5
without outro and reused scene after wanted logo 5/5
thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it ^^

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Re: Wrote - Wanted (Black Lagoon)

Post by TEKnician » Thu May 06, 2010 1:58 pm

WOW...
4/5 IF that part where she said "Would you like to?" was lipsync'd better, this would be a perfect 5/5. All the sound FX from the trailer were perfectly matched to the clips. I love the ending car chase! :up: :awesome:
I love this anime...
Almost as hard as fighting a Holy Paladin.

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