[Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

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[Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by gotegenks » Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:06 am

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY NICK~

okay, this is just a self-indulging sentimental piece of shit i cooked up last weekend THAT IS PROBLY MY FAVORITE VIDEO EVER, but i can see how people would hate it i guess...

i might have done an overhaul like a few suggested except there was a rock-solid concept that i didn't wanna dismiss and XESIBOI'S BDAY IS TODAY (ending in 7 minutes here in New Mexico)

So basically the idea behind this was that FLCL is the real life and NGE is what's going on inside, how he percieves shit, fantasies, you know, the psyche of the main character (Naota/Shinji) over this girl (Mamimi/Asuka). Canti represents the cool in the main character, the alter ego, Haruko (and i guess Rei) characterize life, and the hardship and joy of it all. IDK if i'm missing anything...in the end the real world ESPLODEZ because the main character is brave enough...i guess... HE GETS OVER the girl and embraces life. I think it leaves him and he's like "fudge..."

so it's the tale of the main character's perception of a relationship with a girl who's important to him,

i'm sort of proud of myself because there's only 1 lyric in this entire thing that doesn't have a purposeful clip that i can successfully back it up with.

(btw i just missed ur bday man T_T)

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HOPE YOU ENJOY! FIRST INVICTUS RELEASE!
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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by Kionon » Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:54 am

Testing direct link via iPad now.

...and my connection must be shit, because I can't get it load fast enough to actually watch it. However, if the connection was fast enough, your video would play directly in the browser. Mine do.
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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by Enigma » Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:19 am

I still don't like this one :<, I enjoyed it lots though :>

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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by gotegenks » Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:36 pm

Kionon wrote:Testing direct link via iPad now.

...and my connection must be shit, because I can't get it load fast enough to actually watch it. However, if the connection was fast enough, your video would play directly in the browser. Mine do.
...didn't know this topic survived the thread, lol.
Enigma wrote:I still don't like this one :<, I enjoyed it lots though :>
that doesn't make sense at all...
"I still don't like dicks :<, but it feels nice up my ass :>" ?

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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by NovusVox » Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:41 pm

I liked it man. Flow was great, effects were used well. Not much else to say. The song reminds me of the Chili Peppers xD

Gets a 4/5 from me :wink:
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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by scalst3r » Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:39 pm

It was good, Clips fit well, song fit the song good as well. The quality Was raped though, ik how good it was, so lets see..

Flow:5
Song:5
Quality:5

5/5 Nice job

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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by Mally » Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:49 pm

Lets see what the hell you corrected for this to be a success or just the maybe it always was .

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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by Mally » Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:05 pm

Ahhh i watched it . From the First transition to NGE i liked the video alot .
But in whole this whole video is a mess . It is a big maybe of something which could of been amazing . I say this so , because in the FLCL parts ; sync seemed so forced then all of a sudden it came to the parts where you could feel what was going on and that was quickly thrown away with uneeded that and this . Sorry but the first draft in my opinion was the best .
And remember this is only a part of my opinion .
I saw some nice sparks of creativity and feel pop out and i loved those bits and i wanted to see more of that consistant throughout the rest of the video . But i was let down .
Meh thats my thoughts man .
Great Attempt !
And decent story .
HAPPY BIRTHDAY NICK !

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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by GrooveOn » Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:41 pm

Didnt like the fooly cooly parts to much but the eva parts were sexy 4/5 :up: nice yo

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Re: [Invictus] Ocean Breathes Salty

Post by KHIIFINALMIX » Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:02 pm

c: Yay. ♥
/kicks


...err, am I supposed to rate it?
IF SO, 582908562/5.
8D /shot


Stfu.

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