Darklydone - 7 Layer Bean Dip

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Re: Darklydone - 7 Layer Bean Dip

Post by -MD » Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:26 pm

Dispite anything I say....I may say I like the video hehe...It really caught me off guard at the con.

0:00-0:41 Damn, your overall action editing has improved quite a bit....I dig the opening....
0:41-1:39 Not bad Not bad. 0:51?!?! XO This section was pretty cool. For some reason I end up auto liking rideback in amvs..you worked it well. There was an overlay that you trough in? o.O Umm
1:39-1:48 Yep this part :X Not too serious like the rest of the vid if you get what I mean. Hell yea I see what you are doing....I've done it a few times in IC vids and stuff. But I admit this part of the K-on stuff seemed out of place. I think it was the hugging scene? ._. But even so...I was still like FUCK YEA!! at the con.
1:48-2:28 This section of the K-on stuff I dug personally.....again Hell yea! Again I can see why you put it in...random action video :up: why the hell not put a little something diff in the middle but just...idk pay attention to detail ._. idk how else to say it
2:28-3:09 That was nice....keep editing an improving. I'm starting to like your editing style.

Overall some places throughout the vid (the action editing parts) could be a little cleaner if you know what I mean? Oh yea your masking at the end? I'm sure you saw it. As a con watch I am impressed quite a bit. At home I can afford to be a tad more picky...but it is your vid and you do what you want lol Good stuff bro. Keep it up :p

Edit: nice poster and credits AHAHAHAHA XD

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Re: Darklydone - 7 Layer Bean Dip

Post by x_rex30 » Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:30 pm

It had its fun moments. I thought the simplicity worked for the most part but the flow seemed a bit all over the place.

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Re: Darklydone - 7 Layer Bean Dip

Post by Darklydone » Thu Feb 25, 2010 10:20 am

@Nihilant- “K-ON...doesn't fit at all D: (except for the guitar solo)” o.O; K-On was ONLY there for the guitar solo. Powerful Random Beandip is what I was going for :>

@MD- Cleaner action editing parts? Like trying to cram too much stuff into too many beats/riffs at the same time (Around 0:22ish). Masking at the end? You talking about the problems in the last of the guu dances or with canaan fading out. I noticed both of those problems but not until I’d uploaded to the org and was watching the test video. Neither of those had appeared once while viewing fullscreen or at the con. Only seen them when I was watching it windowed on a screen that has the brightness cranked a little higher than usual on it.

@Enigma/Soupy- 7 L:Ayer sp:Ace chickens buddy :>

@x-rex30- Yes my flow usually does seem to be all over the place. Not something I’m really trying to overcome or anything it’s just how I roll ^_^

@anyone else complaining about the K-On: Hey looks like I achieved what I’d set out to do :> You are correct mirko in that I put it in there for a “Wtf? Why’d he do that?” I probably could have worked a little better on the beginning part of it to try and make it more ‘actiony’ but I really was happier with trying to make it as subtle as possible to deliver a more powerful effect in the later part of the solo. I wouldn’t have been happy with myself had I just made a generic random action vid. I felt it necessary to throw my own twist on it. This kinda thing is what I find entertaining and it isn’t for everyone ^_^

Side note: I did end the cutsey-moe-blob guitar solo with Canaan putting gun to face and pulling the trigger to the rest of the more powerful parts of the song, it was done rather quickly and I suppose it went unnoticed.

Side note 2: There were 4 poorly done bawls masks throughout the guitar solo >_>
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Re: Darklydone - 7 Layer Bean Dip

Post by Elcalavero » Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:25 am

I enjoyed it. Nice job

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Re: Darklydone - 7 Layer Bean Dip

Post by Phantasmagoriat » Thu Feb 25, 2010 9:03 pm

7 girls... 7 Layer Bean Dip.

... so girls are leik Bean Dip? :?

lol not bad. Could have been more 'various,' but still not bad :up:
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