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[SteManga] Go far

Post by SteManga » Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:49 am


Streaming Youtube:
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So I wanted to make a amv about the three characters in shonen 3 different, but with something in common: "Go Far" tells the story of these guys will go away quietly in their street battles between various (following the song I put as beats the 3 most important in order) It seems pretty clean as a job, nothing special in terms of effects, but it is nice xD I like the spirit that took me ehehe ^ ^

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by Wrote » Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:36 pm

I don't think that trying to make a video about three different characters was a good idea because it would make the video a littel messy, speaking about the plot not actually the editing techinques. But in the end I can say that it isn't a bad amv after all :)

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by Diegao » Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:44 pm

Overall is pretty good, but I think is a bit random the way that you tried to tell the story of three different characters.

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by nihilant01 » Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:57 pm

I didn't really like this video
Technically it's quite good and quality is even better...but the direction of the video is a bit awkward :/ it fails in reaching the goal.
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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by SteManga » Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:56 am

diegao94 wrote:I think is a bit random the way that you tried to tell the story of three different characters.
:( :uhoh:

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by jubjub2 » Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:12 pm

I actually liked that you used the three characters. Overall, your editing was very good, but the only weak part I saw was the bridge of the song. That seemed pretty much random.

Nice work!

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by SteManga » Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:06 am

jubjub2 wrote:Overall, your editing was very good
I Like these words :)

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by CodeZTM » Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:51 pm

Hey, I liked it pretty well. The concept was kind of something new, or at least how I saw it. Kind of like showing the determination of the youth and their inner strength. Granted, the Naruto scenes are overused but I'll forgive that. :D

Editing was actually pretty well done. The pace was kept pretty nicely. I liked the small touches of those pen writes and the flim scripts going by.

As for the question of using the three characters? I like the different perspectives and different art styles melding together. The AMV drew on the trials each of the protagonists went through. The action kept up with the pace and helped eximplify this.

What's more is like I stated with the pen writing scenes, it's kind of like the viewer is watching a story being written by an author while it's being ACTUALLY WRITTEN. It was little touches like that that really put this video in a nice position with me.

Here's why I personally really like it. It was an action video, but it also had some conceptuality behind in the character profiling.

AT least I found it entertaining. It's not perfect, but then again, it's very rare that perfection is actually achieved. But I can give this 4/5 easily. :up:

/esh going to leave a copy/paste opinion of this

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by SteManga » Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:00 am

Code wrote:
Spoiler :
Hey, I liked it pretty well. The concept was kind of something new, or at least how I saw it. Kind of like showing the determination of the youth and their inner strength. Granted, the Naruto scenes are overused but I'll forgive that. :D

Editing was actually pretty well done. The pace was kept pretty nicely. I liked the small touches of those pen writes and the flim scripts going by.

As for the question of using the three characters? I like the different perspectives and different art styles melding together. The AMV drew on the trials each of the protagonists went through. The action kept up with the pace and helped eximplify this.

What's more is like I stated with the pen writing scenes, it's kind of like the viewer is watching a story being written by an author while it's being ACTUALLY WRITTEN. It was little touches like that that really put this video in a nice position with me.

Here's why I personally really like it. It was an action video, but it also had some conceptuality behind in the character profiling.

AT least I found it entertaining. It's not perfect, but then again, it's very rare that perfection is actually achieved. But I can give this 4/5 easily. :up:

/esh going to leave a copy/paste opinion of this
Yeeeees you've understand perfectly the sense! ehehe :sweat: thanks you :D

You are one of the few that have said RANDOM XD
Hold this :pizza: lol

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Re: [SteManga] Go far

Post by Animated » Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:06 am

I expected MUCH worse. Good job :D :up:
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