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For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by osnar » Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:08 pm

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This is a video edited for a 2 week contest, where theme was forced, the theme was "Hate".



I tried a new concept in this video, i thought: "everyone uses words over the video, i'll use the video inside words". I don't understand if i like it or not, and the best word that describe this video is "mindfuck". so enjoy xD

i will make a v2... maybe
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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by mirkosp » Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:16 pm

Text made it static somehow, but concept was cool. Overall could have been better but it was fine.
Better than the unfinished shit I did anyway...
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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by Enigma » Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:26 pm

Anoying text is annoying, But video was pretty cool aside from that 3/5.

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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by EkaCoralian » Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:25 pm

The concept was interesting, but I felt that I was paying more attention to what the text said rather than the scenes within them.
It was a nice idea, though. =3
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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by Aggressor » Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:06 pm

I think good vid doesn't need words/letters to illustrate whatever, including hate. And those words were just obstructing the video itself.

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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by Megamom » Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:14 pm

Well done... I like!!! :D
NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE

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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by Rrezz » Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:29 pm

innovative, but i think you should`ve blended the text somehow,maybe overlay it on top of the whole thing with some black and white to separate it from the rest (dunno how much sense that made,but something like that)

also, the lyrics to this song are amazing :|...

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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by osnar » Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:29 am

Rrezz wrote:but i think you should`ve blended the text somehow,maybe overlay it on top of the whole thing with some black and white to separate it from the rest
i thought this also, but imho the "impact" will not be the same
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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by AikiNick » Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:43 am

Not a bad one, I suppose. But I think the text was not really a good idea. The thing is the viewer has to pay attention either to what the text says or to the image inside of it. Thus we can't be amazed by how good you chose the scenes to fit with the words. Just a note for the future.

One question: is titles meant to be from visual basic?
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Re: For(i=1 to infinite) hate();

Post by Koopiskeva » Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:57 am

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