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AyAto -Obsession

Post by AyAto-sama » Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:49 pm



A little bit of alternative story...

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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Animated » Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:56 pm

Omg. Apart from some unneeded effects (like that one that made the characters look plastic), it was... wow. You made a terrific atmosphere. Loved it :up:
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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Mastamind » Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:40 am

The biggest flaw with this is that plastic effect. It distracted from the story and overall didn't look good. However everything else was great. Story was built really well, as was the dramatic atmosphere.
All in all, 4/5. :up:
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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Niotex » Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:52 pm

Every time I see your name I can't help but think of this.

There were some very solid moments in this video but sadly also some horrifying ones. My main problem is the color's you used here and there such as the greens. They completely fall outside of the rest of the color pallet. Thus creating really broken images as the colors simply don't compliment each other. Things like the shatter would've had a little more effort put into them with custom shatter maps as well. Aside from that and the already mentioned "plastic" the video was pretty decent. The final shot used however confuses me where the door merely closes.
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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by AyAto-sama » Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:48 am

Thanks all! It was experimental video in many aspects. Quality of video was bad, therefore it was necessary to cover each piece with filters. :(

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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Niotex » Tue Jan 19, 2010 3:28 am

AyAto-sama wrote:Quality of video was bad, therefore it was necessary to cover each piece with filters. :(
No.. that generally means you have to clean the footage up. That or find better quality source.
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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Radiant_mt » Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:46 am

Very interesting.
The way you presented it was amazing. The quality [source] didn't bother me tho.

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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Magnus » Tue Jan 19, 2010 1:43 pm

You already got my thoughts on this one, enjoyed it a LOT :up: (:
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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Mol » Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:43 am

mhm pretty enjoyable decluding weird looking filters,also lip sync could be a bit better but other than that not bad :up:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: AyAto -Obsession

Post by Elcalavero » Thu Jan 21, 2010 12:37 am

You(AyAto-sama) and Artofeel are the only reason I still exist in these forums/or the org in general. Im a big fan of your Bloodflower video.

Having said that. This video suffers from what your previous amvs suffered from in the past.
You almost always create interesting videos with interesting concepts but sometimes these concepts get
overshadowed/overlooked due to the horrible/unnecessary effects. Your previous amvs were NOT THAT BAD
in terms of effect use, but this video crosses that line.

Not to say the video wasn't enjoyable, it was :) . Its
just, I would have enjoyed it alot more without the unnecessary effects.

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