So Alive...

[gotegenks]

Thanks for the comments, keep in mind that the second vid (Rev. B version) is a bit more refined, and less literal in content matching (i.e. no burning for the most part ^^)...so if you only watched the first vid, the 2nd one in the original post may work a little better.

i actually liked the first better... xD

[CrackTheSky]

Thanks for the comments, keep in mind that the second vid (Rev. B version) is a bit more refined, and less literal in content matching (i.e. no burning for the most part ^^)...so if you only watched the first vid, the 2nd one in the original post may work a little better.

TONS better. You told the story well and the editing is just as solid as it was in the first version. There are still a few scenes that kinda throw the mood ("Your axis on a tilt"), but overall it's a definite improvement. Excellent work.

4/5

[spk1983]

Thanks for the comments, keep in mind that the second vid (Rev. B version) is a bit more refined, and less literal in content matching (i.e. no burning for the most part ^^)...so if you only watched the first vid, the 2nd one in the original post may work a little better.

TONS better. You told the story well and the editing is just as solid as it was in the first version. There are still a few scenes that kinda throw the mood ("Your axis on a tilt"), but overall it's a definite improvement. Excellent work.

4/5

Thanks for the supportive words, it means a good bit to me. I'm not too confident about doing any sort of digital effects to note just yet, so I'm just trying to get my editing down first, before moving on to adding effects to enhance the presentation. Gotta creep before I walk, right?